Sunday, May 15, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 84

Author's notes:
No hints, no clues, no promises! You have to wait!
“Is that your phone?”
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Chapter 84
“Edward?”
I hummed back at her, tilting my head against her hand as she ran fingers over my cheek.
“Can I ask you a question?”
“Sure,” I mumbled back.  I was about eighty percent asleep, and could have found the other twenty percent pretty easily.
“How long do we have to…um…wait?”
“For what?”
“Until we can…do that again?”
Okay.  I was awake again.
“You know,” she continued before I could gather an actual thought.  “Before you can…um…”
Her voice trailed off.  I guess the phrase “how long does it take for your cock to get hard after you come” was a bit much for her to say ten minutes after losing her virginity.
“Maybe twenty minutes or so,” I said.  My heart was pounding again, and I was pretty sure it was considering cutting that time in half, just in case Bella was asking for a specific reason.
“Really?  So we could do it again?  Tonight?”
“Fuck yes!”  Damn my mouth.
Bella giggled and then went back to stroking my cheek.   I felt myself relaxing again, and dropped my head to the pillow beside hers.  My eyes tried to close again, and I thought over the night we had just had – how fucking awesome it was, and how much I wanted to go back and do it all over again.  That started me thinking, which is usually a bad idea.  I wondered if this was a one-time thing for Bella – if she only wanted her one wedding night, and nothing else.  Would she even go out with me again?
I opened my eyes and found her looking at me, a slight smile on her lips.  My mouth opened before I could think, which was nothing new.
“Will you go out with me tomorrow?” I asked.
“Sure,” Bella said simply.  “Where should we go?”
Okay, at least I hadn’t said anything completely stupid this time.
“The Louvre?” I suggested.  That’s in Paris, isn’t it?  Fuck, what if it wasn’t?  “Or just to a café or something?  Go to the water?  Watch the boats?  Anything you want, really.”
Yeah, I was babbling now.
“The Louvre,” she said definitively.  “And dinner again?”
By some miracle, my babbling didn’t seem to hurt.  I thought about how she looked sitting across from me at dinner earlier tonight wearing that red dress, and I remembered she had another one, too.
“You just want a reason to wear that little black dress,” I teased.  Like I didn’t want to see her in it.
“Maybe I’ll dress you up, too,” she said.  “You look pretty good in a suit and tie, you know.”
“I fucking hate ties,” I told her.
“I think a black suit, with that same red tie,” Bella started planning and talking over me like I wasn’t even there.  She placed one fingertip on the end of her chin and tapped softly.  Then she started speaking in a horrible French accent.  “Red suspenders would make you look absolutely delectable.”
Actually, she sounded quite a bit like the gay guy at the salon.
“Are you serious?” I asked.
“Most certainly.” 
I was pretty sure she was mimicking him at this point.  I looked at her eyes for a while, trying to decide if she was just messing with me or not.  She really didn’t look like she was joking.
“If I have to wear suspenders and a tie, you have to wear thigh-high stockings and garters.”
“Deal!”
Damn…I kind of thought she would refuse that one.
“I already have the stockings and garters,” she admitted.  “They were part of what Alice and I ordered before we left.  She said there was no way I was going to be in Paris with nothing to wear.”
“You guys are crazy,” I mumbled, and she laughed.  I leaned over and kissed her nose, and she wrapped her hands around the back of my head and pressed her lips to mine.  A minute later, a buzzing sound came from the other side of the room.  My fucking phone.  It was probably Alice, pissed that we were talking about her.  I didn’t know who it was, and really didn’t give a fuck, either.
“Is that your phone?” Bella asked.
“Yeah – ignore it.”
We went back to kissing, and eventually the damn thing shut up.  It went off a few minutes later though, but I didn’t think Bella noticed.  I continued kissing down her neck and then over to her breasts, sucking each nipple into my mouth.
Twenty minutes was definitely up, and I didn’t want to waste any more time.  I pulled her leg up over my hip and slowly pushed inside of her again.  I felt like I belonged right there – like I had finally figured out where my home was.  I rested my palm against her face.
“Are you okay?  Not sore or anything?”
“Mmmm…more than okay,” she responded.  Her heel dug into my backside a little, pulling me closer each time I moved my hips forward.  I moved without haste, wanting it to last longer than the first one.  I wanted to feel her come while I was inside of her this time. 
My hand moved from her hip to between us – just above where we joined.  I spread my first two fingers apart, surrounding my cock as it moved in and out of her.  Bella gasped as my thumb found her clit and started slowly circling - matching the quiet thrusts inside of her.
“You feel so good,” I mumbled.  “So, so good inside…”
Bella moaned unintelligibly and tucked her head against my chest.  I grabbed her ass with my hand, pulling her to me each time I thrust into her, and she started gasping with each thrust, her sharp breaths matching how I moved, and encouraging me to move faster.
Bella’s hands wrapped around my head and the back of my shoulders, and I quickened my pace.  With her eyes tightly closed, Bella’s panting breaths turned into short cries, muffled by my chest as her body shook around me, tightening on my cock.  I couldn’t hold back at that point, and felt the waves of sensation cascade around my body as I whisper-cried her name against the top of her head.
For a long time, we just stayed in the same position, wrapped up in each other and holding on tightly.  I tried to match her breaths as they slowed and calmed, and tried to keep myself pressed close enough to her that I didn’t slip out.  That didn’t really work for very long, though.  Eventually we had to move a little.  I kissed her forehead, and Bella looked up at me a smiled, then blushed, then mumbled about needed to pee.
While Bella snuck off to the bathroom, my phone started buzzing again.  I reached down to my discarded pants, pulled the thing out of my pocket and switched it off.  I noticed Rosalie’s name on the screen right before it shut down, and I figured what she was calling about.  They’d finally got it right, and deactivated the chips.  I didn’t want to hear that right now, because it would just be the beginning of the end.  I knew it was coming, but it didn’t have to show up right now – not this night.  Nothing was going to ruin this night for us.  Nothing. 
Whatever it was could wait until tomorrow, right?
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Chapter end notes:

Answer the damn phone, Doofus!!!  I guess he's a little wrapped up in the moment.

There should be one more chapter out today.

77 comments:

  1. I don't care if he was wrapped up!  ANSWER THE DAMN PHONE!  All I can imagine is that word some how got back to Charlie about where Bella is located.  He is about to kick down the hotel door, guns blazing, ready to kill the man that stole his daughter.  LMAO

    Oh and the second time around...so damn hot.  lol  NOW JUST TELL HER YOU LOVE HER DOOFUS!

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  2.  Panic the phone makes me panic

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  3. OK, slightly less panicking now, cuz he got a little more, and she likes it!
    However, I'm worried that Rosalie is calling to say they CAN'T deactivate Bella's chip and bad guys have traced them. Ooh.
    I agree with everyone else - Doofus should tell her how he feels - although I think she's got a pretty good idea.
    My other thought is that I bet Edward hasn't ever kissed someone that much ever before. New territories for him! 
     

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  4. Oh hell! Im panicking now...he should have taken 2 secs to answer the phone!!!! Nothing good can come of this! 

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  5. Bella seems to be enjoying herself a bit more now... (heehee)... Hope Rose isn't trying to tell them they've been found by someone again.... but i would not have wanted him to answer the phone either. 

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  6. I'm just a little concerned about that phone call....Bella might be in love too...just an observation. 

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  7. " Nothing was going to ruin this night for us.  Nothing. "   Famous last words I fear.  I usually get so excited when I see an update on this story.  But ever since your insinuation that they are going to be separated my excitement is dampened.  As a matter of fact, when I saw this update, I obviously read it right away, but my first thought was "but I do not want to be sad".  I got a reprieve because it was not sad yet; it was great actually.  But I really wish he had answered his phone!!!

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  8.  OK, forgot about that Lee Stephens guy. Now I'm panicking about what the phone call is about - I think LS was a private eye hired by Charlie. What's gonna go down now? No rest for the wicked! Silly Edward - ANSWER THE PHONE!!! 

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  9. Ahhh, man... It's about the chip, but not what he thinks. God dammit, Doofus!! Answer the freaking phone!

    I'm still panicking here, you evil woman. ;)

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  10. Oh shit..this can't be good...the bag guys are around the corner cuz they traced her chip..right!
     

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  11. Oh no. I hope she isn't warning him that someone is on the way to get Bella or him. But if we know Rosalie and Alice they won't give up easily to an unanswered phone. They are resorceful. LOL 

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  12.  ugh..no good can come of that phone call :(  I will have faith.*chanting*

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  13. still panicking.
    panicking.
    PANICKING!!!!!!

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  14. Thank you for another happy chapter, but yes he should have answered phone. I do not want to see their happy little bubble bursting yet.

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  15. Is this gonna be like EP where they finally deactivate the chip and then Bella gets kidnapped and everyone is kicking themselves trying to reactivate the chip again? Lol. I'm interested to see what's going to happen next ;)

    I'm also sort of interested to know how many words this story is. I mean, we've covered quite a bit in 84 chapters, but I'm curous how long this *actually* is... I mean, shit, these 84 chapters are probably equal to 15 regular Savage chapters, which means we could be only halfway done! Not sure if that is good or bad, honestly!

    I'm trying to think back to any foreshadowing that might help me figure out what's gonna happen... I know Lee could be an issue, of course, and then Edward dropped his bag... hm, I just don't know. I am already super stressed out worrying about what kind of crazy drama is headed our way in Unexpected Circumstances, I'm not sure if I can handle more sadness for this E&B - they really deserve a happily ever after :)

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  16. Oh Doofus!!!!!   ANSWER the phone!!!!!!!!!!!   @MoniNP 

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  17. I guessing the good news is the nights not over yet... ;)

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  18. Doofus is an idiot! who knows what they want to tell him. It may be really important.
    I knew his luck will run out soon.

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  19. What a great night! I am scared to know what Rosalie is calling about. I can't wait for more ;) 

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  20. Actually I wouldn't have answered the phone either but considering the situation they are in, he should have answered the phone, at least while Bella was in the bathroom (not the first time they called ;) ).

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  21. PANIC ATTACK!!!!! He should have answered the phone! All if a sudden I'm worried that the only "good" ending this can have is if he dies. Wow, that would really suck.

    I'm trying to have faith though. When I was reading H&D, I didn't think there was anyway they could end up together either. I mean he did kidnap her, drag her across the globe, drank from her... But he also loved her. If that story could have a HEA then damn it, this one can too! That's what fiction is for, right?

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  22. Oh Edward... why didn't you answer the phone? My heart dropped into my stomach last night at your chapter ending and it's currently residing down there. I had dreams of them cuddling nekkid in bed and then awaking to the door being slammed open against the wall and guns being pointed at their heads by FBI/CIA peeps and then consoled myself with Bella refusing to ever testify against her husband (as I then pondered how legal their marriage could possibly be... but I live in denial and decided that the author just needs to snap her fingers and say that it is for that to work.)

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  23. I love that she asked to do it again. I understand that Edward turned off the phone, I just don't know if it was a good idea considering the situation they are in.
    Anyway, I wanna see the red sexpenders! :-D

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  24.  NOOOO ANSWER THE PHONE

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  25. It's not suprizing that Bella would want to do it again. She may even want to do it several more times before she could go home. Which maybe very soon because with Rosalie's call she might be going home. 

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  26. Edward is clueless about Bella's feelings for him, if he thinks that she would want just a wedding night. He is convinced that she wouldn't want to be with him. 
    I guess the phone call isn't about the chip and hell will break loose soon.

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  27. Shay the Savy Cliffie Queen strikes again!

     If you are home with a sick kid you should be able to write us off of the cliff, right? <--confusing sentence.

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  28. geart chapter, but they be ok, if it was real important they would of called the room phone! or it would of been emmtte or ailce rose is just a TECH guy remeber :)

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  29.  Any other time not answering the phone would be romantic and sexy but now is not the time. Basically, NO ONE is going to call Edward just to make small talk! They are calling because it's important. Answer the damn phone! It is probably life or death.

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  30. Thank-you for that. I wasn't expecting... that. You NEVER disapoint... even if it is sad sometimes, it is always great. Thanks. I was thinking you might give them one more chapter of happiness the morning after, holding each other, talking but it is the same day and they have made love again, both climaxing at the same time too - wahoo!  before all hell breaks loose the next chapter, or so. Thank-you. I have a feeling Rose's call may have been a warning. Look forward to your next update. 

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  31. Another beautiful chapter that you are slowly killing us with, LOL.

    Thanks.

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  32. SHIT SHIT SHIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
    IM SO SCAREDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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  33. What is it that Rosalie has to say?
    I'm dying to know!

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  34.  OMG! The black dress, red tie and suspenders! We're almost at the banner!!!!

    Looks like Bella fucked all his brains out of him, who turns off his phone while in hiding, and with an unidentified tail after them? *shakes head* oh Doofy, Doofy, you have to think with your upper head once in a while.

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  35. I am chewing all my nails down to the nub, which says a lot about my level of anxiety right now.


    No one does slow  burn (or Chinese  torture ) like you.



     thanks for the update .

    this pic ↓ reminded me of you last night.

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  36.  oh thank goodness you were teasing about only one time. Schew ! ! ! !

    Black dress with stockings and garters, red suspenders. We are close to one of the banners. Against the wall...arms positioned over her head. GAH ! ! ! 

    I agree - phone could wait, but he could have read it while she was in the bathroom. 

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  37.  OMG - that pic is awesome!!!

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  38. Why do I have a feeling this is a dum-dum-da-dum....
    looking forward to the next chapter...  

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  39. Methinks Bella needs an anatomy lesson including how male penises (and libido) work!   LOL!  So cute that she wanted to do it again!   Smart woman!

    Doofus.....goddammit, answer the phone.  Somehow I feel your life depends on it!

    xoSu 

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  40. @ann....OMG, so funny (and so true)!  Savage, you are killing me! 

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  41. Oh... I am going to be so sad.... please make it fast...

    Jane

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  42. (I'm replying to myself....*tee-hee*)....just wanted to tell you that I have been in bed with the flu all weekend, and getting up and seeing if there was an update to your story was the first thing I thought of when I woke up this morning!    I love the Shay-Devil pic Ann put up below!

    xoSus 

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  43. This story owns me. Simple as that. 

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  44.  Oh FCUK!!!!!! What gr8 timnin there Rose!!!!!! I swear their separation wil b the death of me..........This definitely cant b over, I WONT TINK OF IT!!!!!!!! 


    BTW, is it wrong for me 2 picture Rob in that suit wid red ite n red suspenders.??? I go crazy for suspenders.....like really n picturin Rob/Ward in them is an absolute fcukin dream!!!!!!
    Eddie, i tink u shudve answered the fone tho............i cud tel dat the fone call wud def ruin the moment wit any kinda news that Rose cud possibly want 2 communicate....so i'm def torn between dat 1.

    Where is the nex chapt?!?!? Argggggggggggggh, cant believ i started readin this Thursday gone...an i'm up 2 par here already!!!!!!!! I used 2 read str8 thru wid no worries but now the wait is gunna kill me...like seriously!!!!!!
    SUMTIN iz about 2 pop off............an i dont tink i like it one bit!!!!!! SO fuckin anxious an a lil bit SCARED tooooooo:(

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  45. I was shouting "Answer the freaking phone!" at the screen...but he didn't seem to listen.  Sigh.  I'm glad they had some more playtime, but at what long-term cost?  Why is it that phone calls always go wrong in Twilight? 

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  46. Oh I am worried about that phone call...

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  47. They are both enjoying each other! The phone freaks me out! Maybe Rose was trying to warn them of danger! .....not good! You should have picked the phone up!

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  48. i have a bad feeling about this.. i think he should have answered the phone.. why do i have a feeling the "bad" guys know about where they are..... you are making me soooo anxious about this... damn you are too good for words!! 

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  49. I am a bit worried about that damn phone call, make that very worried 'cause I am pretty sure that was one call he should have taken. At least they got to do it twice 

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  50.  That phone call has me worried!

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  51. Ooooh, nooooes!  I'm pretty sure he should have answered the phone. That or it's good he didn't if it wouldn't change any part of the looming badness, so at least they're getting some of what Bella and he deserve to have together. 

    Adored her eagerness.  She does a good job of speaking for all of us there! lol  ;D

    So luscious and lovely.  Just love what you do with a love scene.  *blissie sigh*

    Thanks!!!

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  52. Oh yeah, and "Whatever it was could wait until tomorrow, right?" sounds like famous last words to me!! O-O

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  53. I agree he doesn't want things to end, and that maybe that's what Rosalie was calling about, but it could something else. That something might be good or bad, sill, not answering, wasn't the best idea. We do know he tends to have plenty of bad ideas.

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  54. should have answered the phone. think it is something more

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  55. Yeah he's wrapped all right.  wrapped up in her!  

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  56. OH NOOOOO, answer the phone! holy crap! 

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  57. When Rosalie finds out that he ignored her call, he is going to have hell to pay. 

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  58. I like their banter. Cute.

    But but but... the end of the beginning? Wha what? Nohhh!

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  59.  he is thinking with the wrong head right now. Right?

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  60. oh no i bet someone is trying to warn them!! anyways i love how bella was eager to get into it again and edward was eager to ablige!lol!! mmmm some nice hot sexin right there!! i don't blame edward for being wrapped  up in the moment i mean he has waited quite awhile for this so he's making up for lost time who can blame the guy and of course bella is getting plenty of enjoyment!lol! love it!

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  61. uh oh! that sounds important! 

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  62. I think Doofus just created a monster! She wanted to do it again! ;)


    And just as I thought, she wants to spend more time with him! Yay!


    But he should have answered the phone...oh shit, maybe Rose wanted to tell
    him someone's after them....
     

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  63.  Oh no, what was Rosalie going to say?! Was he right or not?! The suspense! 
    Bella made me laugh, though, yeah he created a monster.
    ~Jessi

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  64. Eeeeek! What in the world does she want? I'm nervous! 

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  65. Considering what is going on at the moment, you should always answer your phone. DOOFUS!

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  66.  Gosh, I have impending doom yet swell with such hope! LOL  GAH

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  67. Oh bloody hell! Nothing good can come from this!!

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  68. Oh dear, and this is where Edward puts their physical pleasure (and his emotional insecurities) above ther safety. So I figure Rose is calling to say yes, they can deactivate the tracker, but they see someone has hacked into Bella's signal and could be on their way. Please don't let Bella suffer any more trauma!

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  69. Not if it's bad news! Like someone else found the signal or something! Dumb. That's what that move was. Secksin was nice though ;)

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  70. Maybe it's Charlie that has been following up and locating his daughter??
    Not much has been said about Charlie, I think maybe it's him??? I think he's going to come "save" his daughter. Maybe not, she'd just tell him that she was fine...so who could it be???
    I can't blame Edward for shutting off the phone. Bliss, for him, has been hard to come by.

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  71. Yikes orgasm induced euphoria mixed with love is a powerful intoxication.

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  72. They are both enjoying each other! The phone freaks me out! Maybe Rose was trying to warn them of danger! .....not good! You should have picked the phone up!

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  73. PANIC ATTACK!!!!! He should have answered the phone! All if a sudden I'm worried that the only "good" ending this can have is if he dies. Wow, that would really suck.

    I'm trying to have faith though. When I was reading H&D, I didn't think there was anyway they could end up together either. I mean he did kidnap her, drag her across the globe, drank from her... But he also loved her. If that story could have a HEA then damn it, this one can too! That's what fiction is for, right?

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  74. Thank you for another happy chapter, but yes he should have answered phone. I do not want to see their happy little bubble bursting yet.

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  75. Eek!!! I'm sure that was a warning call to get the fuck out of dodge!

    Hmm another smutty chapter... My hubby will thank you for that later.

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