Sunday, May 15, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 85

Author’s Notes:
I know I know…everyone’s freaking.  This chapter isn’t going to make you feel better.
Remember how this story was categorized as angst?  Yeah – we’re here.
Plans can change pretty quickly. 
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Chapter 85
The thigh-highs were going to be the death of me.
I pulled Bella into the elevator and jabbed at the button about four hundred times in the vain attempt to get the damn contraption moving faster.  If it hadn’t been for some old dude with a cane I might have just jumped her in the elevator car.  Why is there always an audience around when you don’t want one?
The Louvre was fantastic, because Bella smiled and pointed at things and held my hand.  Dinner at an outdoor café was chilly, so I put my jacket around her shoulders, and Bella smiled and let me run my fingers up and down her arm while we waited for our food to be delivered.  The walk along the Seine was beautiful, because Bella smiled at me and let me put my arm around her shoulders as we walked.
  
As much as I liked it, I didn’t care about any of that shit at the moment – I just needed her back in the hotel room so I could get back inside of her and listen to her scream my name again.
“Impatient much?” Bella giggled.  I think she actually drank a whole glass and a half of wine at dinner, and seemed a little less sure on her feet than she usually was.
“And you aren’t?” I scoffed.  She practically molested me in front of a statue of a naked guy – right there in the middle of the museum.  The statue guy had a fucking tiny dick, and I pretended to the offended that it would remind her of me.  She giggled and rubbed her ass against the front of my pants.  The elevator opened and I pulled her by our laced-together fingers down the hallway to our room.
Just like the previous night, the Eiffel Tower was all lit up and shining into the hotel window.  The whole city seemed to be lit up below us.  I pulled Bella close to me and cradled her face in my hands before I kissed her.  I had planned to be slow…gentle…like I had been the night before, but Bella seemed to have other, possibly slightly drunken ideas.
She grabbed the belt loops on my pants and pulled me up against her, first grinding against my hardening cock and then reaching between us to palm it.
“If you do that, I’m just going to come in my pants,” I warned her.  She only giggled in response.
“I think that might be kind of funny,” she said as she gripped me a little harder.
“Oh really?”  I grabbed her hand and stepped forward, backing her up against the wall near the window.  I lifted her arm up until it was high above her head, where I pinned it with my hand.  I froze a second, hoping I wasn’t doing anything she wouldn’t like, but when I looked into her eyes they were sparkling with humor and excitement.  She smiled slyly, then reached down and grabbed me with her other hand.  I grabbed that hand, too – then held it up next to the first one.  I raised my eyebrows at her as I gripped both of her wrists with one hand, and then used the other one to run the full length of her body.
“Oh…Edward…”
“Yeah, we’ll see who’s going to come in their pants now, huh?”
“I’m not wearing any pants.”
“Panties then.”
I ran my free hand over each of her breasts, still looking into her eyes as I moved over her body.  Once my hand got to her stomach, I cupped her sex for a moment through the fabric of her dress, and then dropped lower to pull the dress up higher.
It didn’t have to go a lot higher – the fucker had to be the shortest dress I had ever seen.  I loved it.
My fingers ran down her leg to the edge of her stockings, then around the hem to the inside of her hand and up until I could feel the heat of her core against my fingers.  Her little tiny g-string panties were damp, and I pushed the triangle of fabric out of my way to I could reach her clit.
Bella whimpered, and I covered my mouth with hers.  Our tongues reached for each other’s, the slow caresses of the previous night replaced by a singular urgency.  My fingers circled, retreated, and danced against her clit as she pushed her hips against my hands.  I moaned into her mouth as I felt her getting wetter and wetter, and then slid my fingers deep inside of her with one thrust.
Bella’s head tipped back, banging lightly into the wall.  I kissed her neck, her jaw, and then her ear.  Bella moaned and writhed as I worked my fingers in and out of her.
“You like that, huh?”  I growled against her neck.  My fingers began moving faster and faster – in and out of her wet, slick pussy as my thumb circled around her clit, dropping down sometimes to collect her juices again.
“God…yes…yes…please!”
I shoved my chest against hers – still keeping my hips back so I could finger her better – and my mouth latched on to the edge of her jaw.  I wanted some friction against my stiff cock, but it would just have to wait.  I wanted her to come first.  Maybe second as well.  Then I was going to lay her on her back and take myself home again.  At least, that was the plan.
Plans can change pretty quickly. 
Just when things are going pretty well, and you start thinking maybe life isn’t completely out to get you, that’s when the rug gets pulled out from under you.  That’s when you realize that gigantic glacier you’ve been picking your way across has started to melt, and you’re about to fall into a giant ice cave.  That’s when the proverbial shit hits the proverbial fan.  You can have every step of the next few minutes completely planned out in your head, and they can slowly fade to black as fate rolls the dice and comes up with snake eyes.
It all happened so fucking fast, but at the same time, it was weird how everything slowed down all of the sudden and become crystal clear.
I saw Bella’s glazed eyes as they started to roll back into her head, and her body clenched down on my fingers.
I heard the tiny pinging sound of glass shattering.
I heard the almost-not-there whistle of a tiny missile flying through the air.
I felt the burn of the bullet as it sliced into my skin.
I remembered I never did turn my phone back on again.
Oh shit.
I’d just been shot, right?
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Chapter end notes:
DON’T HURT ME!
It ain’t over yet – I swear.
I’m going back into hiding (i.e., working on UC the rest of today).  There should be another post tomorrow.  You will survive the wait.  I promise.

131 comments:

  1. I will survive...and I sincerely hope THEY do as well!

    Thanks, so much, for sharing with us!!! 

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  2. Wait...I posted...it's gone...

    "I will survive...and I sincerely hope THEY do as well!" 

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  3. You must update really soon sth like now??? Please I wanna next chapter.

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  4.  Sometimes it just takes a minute. :)

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  5. I will not survive the wait. My head just exploded. I need more dammit!


    Ok,ok, I'm ok now ;) 

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  6. OMG I can't belive you did that Please update soon @jerbremer 

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  7.  but but but but. I have to wait??? %$^#%$#@$ LOL! Damn how can one lil chapter leave me soooooooo urgent for more?

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  8.  Daaaammmmnnnn!

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  9. Waaaaaaa! Please tell me it's just a flesh wound. You evil, cruel woman. ;)

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  10. FUCK DOOFY'S LIFE!  New catch phrase!  "FDL." 

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  11. Cannot get Queen's another one bites the dust outta my head now....

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  12. So doofus has gotten shot?  are you 100% sure we will survive the wait?  As i worried about earlier, it would seem they have been found. .... maybe one more itsy bitsy update later? ..... or two?? 

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  13. Oh boy...  Edward's been shot? I can't wait to see it all go down and the pay back is going to be awesome :) 

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  14. A couple chapters back I said that I wasn't freaking the hell out and I trusted you... ummm... I'm freaking the hell out now. You are made of awesome! I'm still trusting you and I'm still loving this story. I'm still holding out for the HEA... please, please don't disappoint. Sigh, I'm a little nervous. 

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  15. I love the story... angst is okay... just don't drag it out please :)  

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  16.  omg nooooo...damn doofusward needs to being paying attention to that shit!

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  17. WTF Savage?! Noooo!!!! I still love you though... but really? Shooting him when she was about to orgasm? That's just... cruel. LOL!

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  18. survive the wait???? mmmmm..I let you know tomorrow!!!

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  19.  I *KNEW* it was coming from the picture when she talked about the red suspenders and the black dress. :-oWho has caught up to them?!? AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!

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  20. OMFG, poor Doofus - and Isabella for that matter. If I were her, I would freak. I least he gets to go during one of the best moments of his life. She on the other hand is left alone with all of their memories. I bet it was that Stevens guy. I hope she gets at least one good punch in in on whoever shot her husband. And where are the French authorities in this?

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  21. Guest-type personMay 15, 2011 at 12:49 PM

     I don't think I can wait! Please update! Ooh, that rhymes! But, please. Where I am, it's nearly 9pm, I'll have to wait till at least 4pm tomorrow! :(

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  22. how much begging do we have to do to get another chapter up asap. pretty pretty please wi a cherry on top

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  23. Okay, so he got careless and forgot they were dodging bullets.
    The boy has never been cared about or loved or been in love before.

    Fucking sue him.

    He doesn't deserve to loose the girl!
    Get hurt, yes, angst . . . yes, fine fine, you said angst.
    Just take card of her and let him live and them be together in the end.

    Charlie can't be involved - sharpshooter from the police?  Bad guys found him?  Emmett turned on him?

    You are an evil, evil woman who has caused me sleep loss for several nights now,  You show no remorse and have made no penance.  i want penance, and you shall have forgiveness.

    they have to be together in the end.  At least don't let them get the marriage annulled or divorced, leave the thread in place!  Woops, no annullment.  She is 18 now and it has been consumated!

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  24.  You are evil...E-VAAAAL!!!

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  25. Okay, alright.  i haven't asked this of you before.
    I love Unexpected circumstances, and as a writer, I love people wanting more . . but...

    I am ovfficially offering a case of wine to be delivered to you.  Today.  in exchange for just one tincy update. 

    (Perhaps the wind would cause the update?)

    Come on, don't leave us like this!

    She is pretty savy, even with a gun, but will she know to call Rosalie IMMEDIATELY and arm herself while caring for him and getting him medical attention - if he needs it.  You haven't told us where he was shot, yet!

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  26.  Wine gives me migraines. :)

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  27. GAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! 

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  28.  OMG no you did not just end that way. Now i am going to be stressing this story all night Good grief woman. It was getting good. I can't wait to see what happens tomorrow.

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  29.  Nothing like getting shot while your wife is cumming all over your fingers lmao!!!! I hope he is ok.

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  30. The old dude in the elevator shot him? They're still in the elevator, right? Did Doofus forget his gun? Phone? Brain?

    xx 

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  31.  No...they went to the room before the finger fucking. :)

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  32. We're here?  Did you say we're here on the angst?
    We have ONLY been on angst since the story started!

    I reread and had to comment.  Of course, you are driving me so crazy for edward i reread hide and drink and reviewed again and surviving Bella!  not to mention the award winning one shot!

    For the love of all that is holy, give us a taste - just s tidbit, you could go for a record number of updates in one day!  It could happen!  Something new! 

    An exercise in mercy . . .

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  33. What, can't you give us another late night update. You are dangling us over a cliff. I guess we can survive until tomorrow. Edward, you should have picked up that phone. Surprised the others didn't try a little harder to tell him what was going on.

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  34. Is it Aro's people coming at him or someone else??? Can't be Charlie or could it???  Always such good twists!!!

    Jane

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  35.  Damn! Is it bad of me that I'm glad Bella at least got off? LOL

    Well, what can I say? serves him right for not checking his damn phone! I appreciate the lovey-dovey stuff, but man, when you're on the run, pay damn attention to everything, not only to the things your cock wants. And, of course, I have faith in you, Savage.

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  36. Savage!!!!    Please have mercy! I didnt sleep well lasta night after "our only night"and now he got shot!?!?!?!?!? Please, let be angst but not tragedy..... we all begging...just forget UC for now and gives something to feel better.... I am a huge fan....but I do need HEA!

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  37. oh no is this wwhen bella gone save her man turn into mr smith? and shot the f how just shot edward :)

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  38. You are evil Savage! I don't know whether to laugh - cuz we knew this was coming when he didn't answer the phone or cry cuz we gotta wait until tomorrow.... Although the thought of you working on UC makes me feel somewhat better! OMFG

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  39. You're evil! You're killing me!!! ¡AAARRRGGGHHH!

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  40. Is that 'wine' or ;whine' that gets you the migrains!
    I would never wish that on you, you are too talented and I enjoy your writing toooo much!

    Sorry for whining . . . just love 'your' Edward!


    . . . . . . . . . . tequila then with the pizza?

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  41. This is so exciting. Doofus should have predicted this. With everything he had been ignoring in the days before, he is lucky if he is not dead.

    I wonder who is going to take her away, her father? (Maybe not, I still think he is dead)  The weird guy supposedly wanted to buy guns? The security guy that vanished?

    All the ladies with the "Edward fun world" tattoo...Just kidding, we wouldn't shoot him ha ha...

    And I can't believe I'm gonna say this, but this chapter is even better than the last one.

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  42. I loved the third paragraph:)

    ~@shelgibson

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  43.  Tequila and pizza works! :)

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  44. *wails*.........*rocking back and forth in the corner*........*sobs*.... tell me the bullet got his ass... or something.... *sniffs*... @MoniNP:disqus 

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  45. WHAT ???????? Tomorrow can't get  here fast enough now.

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  46. Holy shit! It's Alice isn't it? It must look like Edward was forcing Bella when you look in from the outside!

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  47. I had surgery on my left hand and have not felt up to typing but you have made me care less if it hurts or not right now! I am so glad they got at least one night together but this???? and then the A/N that we have to wait?  You are evil woman!  Do you take bribes? 

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  48. Wait - just cause he is wounded doesn't mean he's down!!!
    Edward is tough!

    Maybe your saying they only had one night is because they were then with other people, or she went home for a time . .  .

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  49. WHAT????? OH GOD!!!! OHHPlease let this end well cos ill just die!  I love UC! xxxx

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  50. please please please UC can wait another date. just continue this one. i cant believe edward just been shot. i'm worried for him!!! anyway who shot him? maybe rose couldn't de activate the chip and aro's "friends" found bella and came after her.....
    please please please please i beg you. write sth, even if its short!!! please!!

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  51. Try something other than a case of wine - it gives her migrains . . .

    I tried pizza and tequila as well.  Hum.

    Count me in if you think of anything . . . anything we can do . . .

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  52. Gah!  Okay...trying to stay calm.  WHO SHOT OUR DOOFUS?!? 

    Heh, calmer now (you ARE still evil, Savage ;-o ).  I remember when I first saw that manip there, I wondered if the crosshairs were literal or symbolic.  I guess I have my answer.  

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  53. YES!  What kind and where?


    Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea! Yea!

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  54.  Crap!  You could be right!  In which case she probably winged him!  But why would that have been their only night together?

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  55. Two chapters ago I was sad, then I was apprehensive when I saw the update notice, and this time I cringed when I saw the update notice.  What are you doing to me???  But now I know why I cringed, or at least part of it.  Yes he has been shot...but how badly?  And yes I had already noticed that he had forgotten to turn his phone on.  He has been lacking in knowledge all along when it comes to social skills, but up until Bella's birthday he was always so smart, and so cautious, about everything else.  All of his focus was on making things "right" and giving Bella a great birthday and a great wedding night. And then he got so wrapped up in happy and normal and feeling  like maybe he could actually be happy without fate rising up to bite him in the ass.  So he forgot, so sue him!  I did not seriously think that they were safe from the bad guys, but the last couple of days, it was easy to forget them.  Even though he is shot, I am pretty sure his concern will be for Bella.  At least they had two wonderful dates,right?

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  56. No!  I don't wanna wait!!  Much as I love UC, I love my little Doofy too!  Please look after him for me, I have left him with you!

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  57. OH NO!  How could your do this to us?  You are the Shay-Devil for sure!

    Now I have to go out and be upset for this entire day.....and I'm all worked up!
    Who shot our sweet Doofus?  Please tell us he won't die......Please don't do that!  PLEASE!

    No post til tomorrow?  Oh, shit.....dying here......

    (but I <3 you anyway)......xoSus 

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  58. We could start up a collection and give her all the Tequila and pizza she wants, if we get another update tonight!   PRETTY PLEASE? 

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  59. Just when I start to think Doofusward was becoming smart... this happens!

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  60. Did you make that pic?  That is awesome...... 

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  61. are you kidding me , you left us untill tomorrow like that . although i really love that you're working on UC ,  i can't wait 24 hours not knowing what happen to DOOFY'S he kinda growing on me . so hurry back and update already . but no pressure :)

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  62.  The pic was made by Chonga. :)

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  63. I never thought I would say this, but PLEASE don't write UC today! I was always all for you writing UC but NOT today!!! You are probably getting all angsty with UC, too. Nooooo...

    Just one more update today? I really don't think we will survive until tomorrow. Ladies, help me out here....

    Roshambo

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  64.  Wat da FCUK?!?!?!? As soon as i saw da pic there, i knew exactly wat was about 2 happen....yet stil, wen it happened, IT COMPLETELY SHOCKED THE FCUK outta me. TSK TSK TSK.....Eddie, i told ya that phone call was MUY IMPORTANTE!!!!!! An FCUK, i hope B's okay unda him. Hopefully, he was enuff of a human shield 4 her...............OMG, he's been shot.....OMG hopefully sumwhere dat isnt fatal......OMGGGGGGG, idk wat 2 say or do at this point!!!!! I wanna CRYYYYYY.........savage7289 i cant wait til 2moro?!?!? DAT SHIT IZ CRUEL!!!!!!!SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!!! WAT DA HELL?!?!?!?

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  65.  Edward liked the Louvre, the dinner, the walk, because Bella  had a good time and looked happy to be with him - the way he thought about it shows how much in love he is.
    The moment with the statue cracked me up! 
    The target has been on the banner - I didn't notice it at all. I am trying to be optimistic and to not think of the bad scenarios. Hope that these are the good guys!  

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  66. I'm glad that this is the internet and you can't hear me chant "motherfucker!" over and over again. ;)

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  67. I don't know if consumation cancels out annulment - I know someone who got an annulment after 5 years of marriage and 1 kid! There's always loopholes, and the fact that Bella used Bella Cullen as her maiden name may be one of them.  

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  68. Should have answered the phone.  

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  69. Yeah, I knew not answering that phone was a mistake! Doofus was shot? Hopefully it Just grazed him and he can get them both to safety! Now I am stressed ! UGGG!

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  70. Catalina AntoineMay 15, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    noooooooo!!!! :( what will we do if dear doofous dies??!?!?!?!?!?!? or what will he do if Bella dies?!?!?!?!? I hope is a sleeping dart, or a grenade, or a flying pinguin, anything but a bullet... :(

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  71. Da-da-da. Oh boy. Again not what I was expecting. I figured they might be on the run in this chapter, because someone in the Paris group was left alive, and recognised them, or someone connected to Charlie came to rescew Bella and arrest or kill Edward, or someone from America came in connection to the chip/Aro's people and tracked them down, or last but not least Rose and Em and Ali and Jaz would show up to deactivate the chip and thinking it is all over would want a little celebration before sending Bella home, or so they would think not knowing that Bella and Edward are falling for each other. Did not expect anyone getting hurt. Oh boy. Oh boy. Oh boy. 

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  72. Ok so this is the first time that I comment here, I am a middle school teacher and I don't have a lot of time, but now I only have about 15 days left of school so I told myself what a heck so this is my comment
    What in the world just happened!!!!! You are a cruel talented woman just leaving us hanging like that, I can't wait to read what happens next. This story and UC have been helping me to get through the last few weeks of school, I can't wait for your next updates.
    I guess now all I can do is take a deep breath and wait patiently like everyone else..... 

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  73. HFS!  I knew something was going to happen, but NOT that... please, be winged, please be winged...
     

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  74. Yea, but she would have to agree to it . . . and I don't think she will . . . .;) at least I hope not . . .

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  75. For some chapters, I'm not certain what I like better - the chapter itself or your notes - your notes ALWAYS crack me up!  This chapter, I didn't "like" anything!!  well, not true, the pic was fantastic.  the placement couldnt have been better!! 

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  76. oh man you just won the prize of queen of the evil authors!! damn that sucks ass and then on top you leave us hanging!!  i hope you didn't kill him and don't tell me they are going to grab bella and then he will have to go find her..... argh!!!!!!! i am going to be pulling on my hair like eddie!!! 

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  77. I will survive the wait as long as you don't kill off Edward. If you do I will have to find you and hurt you. LOL 

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  78.  I crown you BEST CLIFFIE QUEEN of FF!!!!  Love it!  

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  79. You're a beast, you know that! I won't believe Edward is mortally wounded but that he got shot is bad enough! Yup, he should have taken that phone call.

    What's with this comment box? I type and I am like one word behind as I am typing and it's really driving me crazy.

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  80. i dont know what to think.  i think i am in shock.

     i know his chances for a normal life with bella are close to none, but, this is fiction, you can make it happen, right?



    i mean, just look at the puppies. even they are sad.

    thanks for the update shay.

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  81.  Was that supposed to make me laugh, becasue it sure did!!

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  82. Yep, finally finds love and looses his edge. Can't be in that line of work and think with the wrong head.
    Since he didn't answer phone, I'm gonna assume backup is on the way.or that the bullet was Alice being a little pissed!

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  83.  No no no no non ono non no non on no no no no................... please leave UC and tell me what happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  84.  Ah! You're seriously gonna leave us hanging like that? 

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  85.  ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! woman! what the hell!

    at least bella got hers...

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  86. I knew he should have answered that damn phone!  So much for easy going. I'm putting my faith in you....because it's a great story.

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  87. Oh and hot picture also....really good! 

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  88. hoping it was just a nick

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  89. what the hell, ruined a perfectly good moment,  

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  90.  Soooooooooo, i jus read this chapter agen jus so it cud sink in dat my Eddie's been SHOT!?!?!? i tink it hit me harder this time......last time i read, i was in SHOCK i presume!!!!!! Daymeeeeeeeeee, wonda who it cud be?!?!?

    Anywayzzzzz.............d main reason i'm on here iz 4 Chapt 86, so lets ged on wid it shall we?!?!

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  91. God, Savage, I just fucking hate you right now!  HOw in the world could you let this sweet sweet man who just made love for the first time get shot?????  why?????????????

    i can't stand it.  Poor dufus.  Only he would get shot in front of the eiffel tower. 

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  92. I don't know what freaks me out more, your A/N or Doofus getting shot. I had to do a double take when I saw the banner because I swear to you I never noticed that damned target on it until I saw it again now. Please, I love Doffus, Don’t kill him.

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  93. Hahaha I am not going to hurt you. THis chapter had me biting my nails.  I knew it was coming and the picture did not help to decrease my suspense.  EXCELLENT

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  94. OMG! just  exactly like the picture, wow I'm impressed,  

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  95. The advice I give my kids comes to mind, "you can survive the wait happy or you can survive the wait sad... you choose."   *curses pouts and stomps off to find something to do while we all wait*   ;D lol

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  96. So let me get this straight: he was shot while his fingers were in her. . . So the sharp shooter's sitting there, watching him finger fuck her, waiting for the go ahead, they radio 'well let's just let her finish' *then* he shoots?

    I'm loling in an empty apartment picturing this.

    Congrats on your mad voodoo skills woman: you really did have us all forgetting what this was about from the beginning.

    When you started, you started so ugly, and people promised they could never be okay with it, and certainly not have any fun. Then you got us having fun. We bought into it. Now we're mad at you for bringing us back to the place we claimed we wouldn't leave. There's irony in there somewhere.

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  97. So, he was having such an amazing time, enjoying the day along side Bella. It was the perfect day, after a perfect night and was about to be another perfect night.
    If he had turned on the phone, perhaps it might ot have been as wonderful, but he probably wouldn't have been shot either.

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  98. ROFLPIMP! Never heard that one before, and I am going to steal it. Thanks. ;)

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  99. Freaking the fuck out here! Plz be kind. I love Doofy.

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  100.  WHAAAA!?! God, please no! Don't let Bella be shot, because he can't exactly take her to the hospital. Please hurry. 

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  101. What Edward got shot! Someone should answer their phone. I'm freaking out a little bit. Hope they make it.

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  102. don't hurt u ????? i wanna kill u right now  

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  103. OMFG!!!!! that is SRS cockblock!!!!!!!!!!!please please don't let him die or i'm gonna!!!! poor edward omg poor bella omg poor fucking me!! omg i have to run and read the next chapter!!!! 

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  104. Oh shit!!!!!  

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  105. oh my god! don't kill him! 

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  106. Oh no! I don't want to hurt you, Savage, but that Doofus for not turning his
    phone on again!


    Damn! I do hope I'll survive the wait...but it scares me that they're both
    in such a vulnerable position right now....
     

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  107.  WHAT?! This was pure evil! Loved it, though! The suspense! I think I almost fell out of my chair. ~Jessi

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  108. Not that... please don't kill him off.

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  109. Oh.My.God. Ahhhhhh Edward how could you???????? 

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  110. *ding* Next chapter here I come.

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  111. OH FUCK! I was dying as soon as I saw the crosshairs in the second manip! UGH! SOB

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  112. I'm only able to survive as the chapter is already there for me to go to next!! If that were not the case I couldn't be held responsible foe my actions!!

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  113. I guess Edward hasn't yet learned that he needs to stop thinking with his dick. That's when he makes the biggest mistakes with Bella, i.e. buying her in the first place and now disregarding their safety. Hopefully he's not shot too badly, but Bella is going to completely flip her shit!

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  114. Holy Crap! I didn't realize there were crosshairs until I read your post.
    Great manip; Can't stop reading.

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  115. This was one HOT chapter.

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  116. I knew something was up . . . I kinda read everyone's review last chapter and agreed :)

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  117. Thank god I don't have to wait for updates and this is finished, because I swear I would not make the wait. 

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  118. Oh, for the love of all things Edward....I guess if your gonna get shot, it's better that you just got your woman off...right?

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  119. What Edward got shot! Someone should answer their phone. I'm freaking out a little bit. Hope they make it.

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  120. Yeah, I knew not answering that phone was a mistake! Doofus was shot? Hopefully it Just grazed him and he can get them both to safety! Now I am stressed ! UGGG!

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  121. I never thought I would say this, but PLEASE don't write UC today! I was always all for you writing UC but NOT today!!! You are probably getting all angsty with UC, too. Nooooo...

    Just one more update today? I really don't think we will survive until tomorrow. Ladies, help me out here....

    Roshambo

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  122. What, can't you give us another late night update. You are dangling us over a cliff. I guess we can survive until tomorrow. Edward, you should have picked up that phone. Surprised the others didn't try a little harder to tell him what was going on.

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  123. WTF Savage?! Noooo!!!! I still love you though... but really? Shooting him when she was about to orgasm? That's just... cruel. LOL!

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  124. :"( I knew I shouldn't have read on... At least not tonight...

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