Wednesday, May 4, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 71

Author’s Notes:
I am to a virgin!!!  *sad face*
Nobody on Twitter believes me.  Nobody believes me.  Not even my kids.
Damnit, I sounded like a fucking teenager.
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Chapter 71
Bella’s hand continued running up and down my lounge-pants covered shaft while my brain turned into a melted pudding pop.  My hand was still against her breast, and my mouth was still completely engulfed in hers, so I couldn’t really protest.
Not that I wanted to.
What I wanted to do was roll right over her, shred the sweats she was wearing and fuck her into tomorrow.
Tomorrow.
Bella’s birthday.
“Bella,” I mumbled around her lips.  It was really hard to remove myself from those lips, but I felt like I really, really needed to try.  “Bella please…please…stop.”
She broke away from me and looked up into my eyes, the hurt and confusion from the other night coming back and tearing into me.  I was going to fuck it all up again.  I couldn’t let that happen.
“No!”  I cried out, and my hand went immediately from her breast to the side of her face.  “I want you, Bella…Bella I do…I want you so much!”
“Why stop?” she asked.
I take her face in both of my hands and kiss her softly on her lips.
“I will give you your wedding night,” I vowed to her.  It wasn’t lost on me that we hadn’t really had any wedding vows at all – just said a couple of words while the overworked guy at his desk signed the papers.  “I swear I will.  But I want to make it perfect for you.  I don’t want to rush into it when you’re probably still mad at me, at least a little.”
“I’m not,” she insisted with a shake of her head.  “I’m ready now, Edward.”
“I’m not ready,” I told her.  “You are too important to just do this.  I want to…to make it right.  Make it…special?”
Why did I sound like I was asking a fucking question?
“Please, Bella.  Please let me make it right for you.  I just need a little time.”
Bella pushed me back away from her and sat up.  She looked over to the twinkling lights outside the window and bit at her lip for a minute before turning back.
“Tomorrow?” she said softly
“Tomorrow,” I agreed.
Bella smiled, but her disappointment still obvious in her expression.  I don’t know why I didn’t occur to me before, but there was still plenty to be done, even if we weren’t going all the way.
Damnit, I sounded like a fucking teenager.
Of course, Bella was a fucking teenager.
Well, not a fucking one.  Not yet anyway.
Shit.
I tugged at my hair for a second to try and refocus myself.  If I thought about this too much…I mean, she really was young.  Eighteen to my twenty eight.  No wait – nineteen tomorrow.  That made all the difference, didn’t it?  At least I wasn’t a full decade older than her was.
Bella reached down and grabbed her shirt where it lay on top of the blanket.  I put my hand on top of hers, stopping her movement.
“That didn’t mean I was done with you yet,” I told her, and her eyes flashed up to mine.  I slid my fingers up the side of her arm slowly, then across her shoulder and back down to her breast.  So soft…  I glanced back up at her as my thumb grazed her nipple.  “I just want to save the rest for tomorrow, you know?”
“Birthday present?” Bella said as she raised her eyebrows at me.
“Exactly.”  I smiled.  Looking into her eyes, I took the chance and ran my thumb back over her nipple again, then pinched it softly.  She gasped, and I covered her mouth with mine as I slowly lowered her back to the bed.  I held myself over her and kissed slowly up her jaw to her ear.
“I still get to give you an early birthday present, don’t I?”
“Hmm…” Bella hummed.  “What are you going to give me?”
My hand traveled down her neck and rested on her hip.  I knew exactly what I wanted to give her, but I wasn’t really too sure how to go about saying it.  I knew one thing – I had about a ninety percent chance of saying it wrong.  My best strategy had been to shut the fuck up, but I had to say something here.  I want to shove my fingers in your pussy and make you come while screaming my name didn’t seem to be the most romantic option.
I looked from my hand back to her face, hoping I was doing the right thing and not reading her wrong.  If she was ready to actually have sex with me, surely this would be okay.  I licked my lips and took a slow breath, blowing warm air gently over her neck.  Bella shivered, and her fingers dug into my biceps.  I moved back down her jaw, over her chin, and then down her neck.  I kissed across her collarbones and nuzzled my nose against the top of her breasts before I brought my eyes back to hers.
“Can I touch you?”  My hand slipped from her hip to her stomach, and my fingers lifted the edge of her sweats up just a little so they could sneak underneath.
She would let me do this, right?
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Chapter end notes:
Who remembers pudding pops?  Do they still make those?  I want a pudding pop….
They are making progress!!  And of COURSE I cock-blocked you!!  The chapters are freaking tiny!  It will take about fifteen of them to make a whole smut scene!  I could write one whole chapter that would be nothing but him coming! 
Hey….that’s not a bad idea…
Until tomorrow!

85 comments:

  1. i don't know the right guy saying " I want to shove my fingers in your pussy and make you come while screaming my name" might do the trick for me. i know i know i am not bella and bella is not me, just saying

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  2. Pudding pops or shit sticks because after eating them, that's all my son does. And you so cockblocked! But I understand. Why is he waiting? I'm still trying to figure out how much more perfect it can get. Please don't let anything stop Doofus!

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  3. As far as I'm concerned my mom will never know I'm not a virgin, children be damned. I also love the pudding pops, and still look for them every time I go to the store, but can't find the fuckers. I've been popblocked by fucking Bill Cosby. Now, as for these two kids... please let her grab him by the head and shove his face in her girly bits as punishment for being such a GD cocktease, lol.

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  4. I was about to say the EXACT same thing...

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  5. See how sweet Doofward is being? I knew he had it in him. I don't mind if it takes you 15 chapters to write one smut scene; it's just more to look forward to. You mean to tell me that even your children do not believe you when you tell them you are a virgin? I cannot believe that! lol! I think maybe you are writing your author's notes kind of tipsy? You are so funny! I love it!

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  6. I am completely sober. Tipsy savage gets scary. Kind of incoherent, too. ;)

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  7. LOL loved the chapter and your author notes, I did see some pudding pops here a few months back....Bella is going to have a very happy birthday....Well I hope so anyway.

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  8. I meant only one chapter about him coming....

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  9. Umm...there are 71 chapters. :) Click on the links up the right side of the blog.

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  10. I HAVE FINALLY FOUND IT! I had been wondering about this fic, but dumb dumb me never thought to go check out your profile. Then I randomly see this little Twitter update and POOF I have found it! Success! YAY! I know have MAJOR catching up to do.

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  11. DOH!!! Sorry about that. Maybe I am tipsy. :) Umm...let's see...with the size of his cock, it will probably be three chapters. ;)

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  12. Awww poor virginal Savage lmao Great chapter! very hawt. thanks Cockblocker..I mean Savage.

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  13. Damn. Cold shower time....

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  14. a whole chapter of him orgasming... I'm sure there'll be lots of yelling involved!
    love how hot this is getting - went back to reread the beginning, and realized poor eddie only got one topless night and one bj out of his investment. he's really been a good boy since then!

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  15. and, oh yeah, it makes a BIG difference only being 9 years older than him, rather than 10, right???

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  16. If you're a virgin then I'm one too :P I think you love cockblocking us and probably did an evil laugh when you posted this....so mean :D

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  17. i meant "her" - older than "her"
    gotta go drink more chocolate wine, so i can be more coherent

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  18. You know, a year can make a LOT of difference... ;)

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  19. LO fucking L! I would so read that chapter.

    thanks for the update shay. ;)

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  20. Oh for God's sake, you are killing me here! Are you a firm believer in human torture? How many times are you going to cock block us before "it" happens? LOL. Come on already, bring it on. I want to see Edward experience what it's like to have sex with someone he loves and cares about and how different that is than just doing "it" with any piece of ... well, you know what I mean.

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  21. Shay...you have been drinking, haven't you? Pudding pos- yeah still got em bit they aren't as good as they used to be....they always seem freezer burned.
    And your still on point, u said ch 80 for the hump ;)

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  22. You are mean, really evil, didyou know that? Fifteen chapters!!!!!! I want to cry, please, pretty please, longer chapters!!! The tension is rising and apparently won't stop ;)

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  23. I'll take the whole coming chapter. hehe. i'm not one to complain. much.

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  24. saying you could write a whole chapter with nothing but him coming and not following through is just teasing us ya know!!... Pudding Pops were awesome....

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  25. CBWR? is just getting better and better :-) Doofusward is doing a few things right - I am proud of him - I am looking forward to seeing what happens on Bella's birthday..

    And sorry I have not been leaving comments for every chapter, I have been reading a lot of chapters away from home and my phone won't let me leave a comment the bloody thing!

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  26. Of course she will say yes!... At least I'm hoping she will.
    I love that he is loosing control and still thinking of her reaction to his words.

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  27. 15 chapters, you are killing me ... I hope no one comes and stops the "birthday present" And Yes I do want one chapter on Edward coming.. things I could do with that chapter..eesh .. ..

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  28. I cant really think of a nicer way to say it LOL

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  29. Oh I loved Chocolate Pudding Pops!! Have you ever made your own???
    Tiny baby steps for doofus....but glad Edward is trying to get her wedding night perfect as he can.
    Love them.

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  30. I'm so proud of Edward! He stopped! And of course she'll let you touch her, stupid! :)

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  31. You are so bad... A whole chapter with just him coming, lol! They are making progress! I love a sweet Doofusward!

    And I remember pudding pops! And if you remember them, there ain't no way you're a virgin! Ha!

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  32. Dang! More tomorrow, right?

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  33. I remember pudding pops. Oh they were so good. I think they still make them but not totaly sure. I will have to check next time I go to the store.
    I don't think Edward has anything to worry about. Any girl including Bella wants his fingers. LOL
    Yes please stop cock blocking. We need you to throw us a bone. Literaly. LOL

    mwah
    barbr9

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  34. Oh I like where your head is going there woman. They don't have to stop, damn straignt... they are just getting started. He's definitely on the right track now.. He explained that he wants her, he didn't just deny her, reject her, frustrate her, and he told her his intentions by asking permission and touching her in a safe place. Now this boy has to have aquired some skills, right? So he could certainly start the process of getting to know her body and giving her pleasure before their first time... her first time, which might not be that great for her because of his what did you say 9 inches. Oh my God! Maybe he should just wrap her legs around his waist and rock those hips of his against her. That would get them both satisfied for toghight. Geesh!

    I am so glad he is catching on, she wants him, she's ready and there are lots of ways he can please her... and himself without doing the deed. Say what happened to them talking some more?

    I bet she is going to want to go sight seeing on her birthday or at least out for dinner, isnt she? If it were me I would want to hide under the bed. I would be so afraid of being seen by one of Aro's men who might be still alive after all they are in Paris where they started off in Europe or one of those other two guys could be out there waiting for them too. I hope there are some nice boutiques in the hotel for some gifts - besides the wedding night for Bella, for a new dress, some new shoes, a diamond tennis bracelet perhaps. Definitely a cake and hopefully a declaration of his feelings for her because you are right they never got to say nice vows to each other so that would be really romantic, oh and some new clothes for Edward, as he must be out, right? No suitcase... no clothes. Hey what does Bella have in that white box that she didn't want to tell him about?

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  35. Oh man! what a tease! I do remember pudding pops but lately all I have seen are the fudge ones, do those count??? they are damn good :)

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  36. I am ok with this cockblock, Savage. All good. But this one-whole-chapter-of-coming better be a promise, yes?

    And I'm sure someone already answered you about the pudding pops. I loved them too and miss them. Why did they take take them off of the market? Fuckers.

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  37. You're evil! LOL!

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  38. you couldn't be that fucking cruel...could you?

    okay, first you're a virgin and now you want pudding pops? hey! is this one of savage's children online here? put your mom on the phone, you ought to know better than be on this site, hang up NOW...where is your mom? let me speak to your mom - SSSSSSSAAAAAAVVVVVVAAAAAAAGGGGGGE!

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  39. An early birthday present from Edward? Hell yeah!
    I hope he gets her something pretty as well for her birthday. All though the smutty times are the best part.

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  40. p.s. i love this story

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  41. mostly a lurkerMay 4, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    Your story title is so apt methinks. Yes, it definitely could be worse, ah ha ha ha ha!

    And if you're doing a chapter on just doofy coming at the end of 15 chaps of smut, can at least one, maybe two chapters be devoted to him entering her that first time? That anticipation and first moment is always just so.... *thud*

    *sits up groggily* huh? Wha... Wher... Doof... Pudding.... *passes out from all the images of fucking and homemade pudding pops swirling in my head*

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  42. okay, first you're a virgin and now you want pudding pops? hey! is this one of savage's children online here? put your mom on the phone, you ought to know better than be on this site, hang up NOW...where is your mom? let me speak to your mom - SSSSSSSAAAAAAVVVVVVAAAAAAAGGGGGGE!

    LMAO!

    Shay- I can see the fourth is really with you today. You are out of control!

    Roshambo

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  43. Smeyersrules - I answered your query on chap 68. Please to go there and read the answer. I hope you find it assistful :-)

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  44. Wow, from a face-slap to grabbing his cock? Gawd, no wonder Edward's so worked up! And he's the one that stopped it? This is making my head spin....LOL!

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  45. ohhh savage.... how you do love to tease... i want to know what in his addled mind possibly thinks he can make it perfecr by tomorrow - and his googling being romantic earlier was WIN! Perfect for him.....

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  46. One gigantic Scooby snack coming right up. Doofus did everything right, what the hell is wrong with him?
    And yes she will let him do this. The poor girl needs some relief too.
    I'm looking forward to that whole chapter of Doofus coming :-)

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  47. All right, the kissings great but how can they not worry about who is after them?! How can they think police are completely oblivious to this stuff, how often do multiple crime families disappear in 24 hours?
    I thought E. was a criminal? I thought criminals were opportunist? Why is he putting sex off? Hey, how exactly is a rainbow made?

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  48. and we gotta wait until tomorrow?? aaggghhh! lol

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  49. Just say YES Bella!

    trust me you wont regret it! ;)

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  50. Oh I sooooooooooo agree about the one or two chapters describing him entering her! I love to read first time stories just for that moment of anticipation and then when it happens like their reaction to being together finally like what they feel emotionaly and just all that wonderful stuff!

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  51. Yay! That's not a bad idea at all...and I'd gladly go for the fifteen chapters too...I'm blushing profusely here...but you can't tell, 'cause my face has reddened considerably after reading this...

    P.S. Go for it Bella! The guy loves you, so it should feel so right...

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  52. I am now certain that you love cockblocking us and you know we will come drooling back for maybe the day he will finally penetrate her with the 9" you so happily described early on in this amazing, but very teasing..short chaptered story!! You must hoot or cackle or just bust your gut laughing at what you do to us readers everytime you post and love that we love you so much to be put through such cruelties..haha!! I would be thrilled if you took 15 chapters to describe every last detail of Edward feeling loved for the first time while he is having an orgasm and yes take a full chapter to describe it by all means!! Also be sure to describe Edwards mad skills he has aquired,but because he loves Bella he will be gentle and kind and blow her mind so she never dreams of those fuckers doing crazy shit to her again!! Bill Cosby rocked.. I lived for his stand up comedy in college..too many years ago to say, but jello pudding pops rocked my world..who the hell thought it was a good idea to get rid of them and why didn't we put up a stink!! Anyways now that I've found my voice on this site...well you know me..email me and tell me to can it.. if you need me to!!

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  53. Well, Doofus...if she doesn't let you do this, she's a fool. In other words, I think that's a very nice early birthday present, and she should accept. ;-)

    And yes, another cockblock! (Why am I not surprised?)

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  54. I love it. It's about time that they are going to get some.And I totally agree with Ibritt1376 about the whole " I want to shove my fingers in your pussy and make you come while screaming my name" thing. Even more so is the guy looked like Edward! YUM!

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  55. wow he can be so sweet sometimes but he really is a doofus...love it

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  56. LMAO, Love this story. I can't stop reading long enough to comment, but here goes. I love the short but quick updates, cause I'm an impatient h00r. Fluv your writing, and have read all your stuff. I'll be waiting for the pre-birthday cum. LOL

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  57. Cant wait for tomorrow......actually its already tomorrow but you know what i mean..... so, his gift is an orgasm. Oh God, where can i get an edward of my own???

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  58. Wait...a whole chapter of just him coming? uh...no, not so much! But really, he IS getting in touch with his humanity, isn't he? He's doing all the right things NOW, that is for sure. I have a suspicion that tomorrow is Bella's 18th birthday, not her 19th birthday.

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  59. Thank you very much! This insightful explanation of the way Edward’s mother influenced his personality was very interesting and helpful for me.

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  60. LMAO .. u'r so funny ..
    it's gonna take about 26 chapter till we get to the birthday night when they actually get to have sex right ?? and then u'r gonna cockblock us and them AGAIN by making her freak out the second he decides to slip his dick in .. i know it .. i just know it

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  61. Ohhhhh, a whole chapter of that sounds fucking awesome....just saying!

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  62. I am going to combust from cock-blocks! LOL Another great chapter! LOVE how Edward had the presence of mind to hold off on doing the actual deed so that it would be special for her. He need to make that girl feel REAL good. Perhaps he can take a trip "downtown"? *smirk*

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  63. JFC. Why all the self induced cock blocking, Doofy?


    I've never had a pudding pop. I feel like I've missed out on some major pop culture event. Wonder if you can buy 'em on ebay...

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  64. Nothing like an experienced older man to show B the,er, ropes (well, maybe not actual ropes - yet).

    Is Doofy experienced? That is, has he ever helped a woman to orgasm without fucking her? Takes a patient man who knows what he is doing. Ah, well. there's a first time for everything.

    "...asking a question..." <--- love your nod to (still) my fav two-shot!

    xx

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  65. i think ed would be in pain if he had to come a whole chapter..it would suck if he was in mid thrust and you decided to end the chapter he must be getting really pissed at you!! haha!!

    yeah pudding pops i think we are showing our age. I am not sure they make them anymore... fudge-cicles they still make... okay now i am really going to show my age you could make them!!! thanks for the update!!!

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  66. Ready for the "cum chapter"!!!!

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  67. Who else likes that idea? The one Savage had of taking an entire chapter of nothing but Edward coming??? *raises hand* Hmmm......*looks around and see that it is an unanimous vote* Bring. It. On.! *snicker*

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  68. b just might really like her early b-day present

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  69. an entire chapter of Edward coming? Im game, sounds good to me! I got a little behind on my reading! RL has been busy the last couple of days! I may have missed reviewing on a chapter! I am on to the next!.....Karen

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  70. Oooh, it's gett ing so good... Again, virgins really need to round all the bases properly before going all the way. Here's to second base (or is it third?)!

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  71. she better say yes! stop yanking poor edward around!

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  72. Good move......shutting up.  

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  73.  hahahaaaaaaaaaa................#MajorFcukinCockBlock. an trus me......dat whole chapt on Eddie coming betr b COMIN!!!!!!!!!

    Tings gettin lil heated between these two....i hav 2 say lil heated cuz ur gonna take 15 chapts to giv us in on da real action!!!!!!!! I am sooooooooooo lovin this

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  74. I love your short little chapters! They're perfect  

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  75. 9-10 year difference is soo bad, at least he isn't old enough to be her father. My niece is married to a guy that went to high school with her mom.o.0

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  76.  Hey, I love your "ideas" LOL! :)

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  77. What he said! What he said....please!!!

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  78. Yes a pre birthday present definitely works.

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  79. okay, first you're a virgin and now you want pudding pops? hey! is this one of savage's children online here? put your mom on the phone, you ought to know better than be on this site, hang up NOW...where is your mom? let me speak to your mom - SSSSSSSAAAAAAVVVVVVAAAAAAAGGGGGGE!

    LMAO!

    Shay- I can see the fourth is really with you today. You are out of control!

    Roshambo

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  80. You are so bad... A whole chapter with just him coming, lol! They are making progress! I love a sweet Doofusward!

    And I remember pudding pops! And if you remember them, there ain't no way you're a virgin! Ha!

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  81. Shay...you have been drinking, haven't you? Pudding pos- yeah still got em bit they aren't as good as they used to be....they always seem freezer burned.
    And your still on point, u said ch 80 for the hump ;)

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  82. Pudding pops or shit sticks because after eating them, that's all my son does. And you so cockblocked! But I understand. Why is he waiting? I'm still trying to figure out how much more perfect it can get. Please don't let anything stop Doofus!

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  83. Looking forward to the entire chapter of Edward cumming! Yum

    Rotflmao at your virgin Comment <3 you!

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