Wednesday, May 4, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 70

Author's notes:
I hope everyone is having a wonderful Star Wars Day!  May the Fourth be with you!
ROFLMAO!!!
Then her hand abruptly dropped lower.
Chapter 70
Shower to get the smoke smell off of me – check.
Extra tooth brushing to get the smoke smell off me – check.
Hefty doses of mouthwash for the same – check.
Room aired out for…um…there’s a theme here, isn’t there?  – check.
Leaving my shirt off right before I came to bed at Bella’s request – double-fucking check.
Okay – so we weren’t actually having make up sex, because we weren’t..well…having sex…but the term meant something to me for the first time ever.  Emmett had talked about it before, and I had certainly heard the expression on more than one occasion, but I didn’t really understand it.  I guess I’d never “made up” with someone before.
Bella’s hands were in my hair, then running down my arms and back up over my chest.  Her mouth never left mine, and I was actually starting to wonder if she was on the swimming team or something, because she could really hold her breath a long time.  I ran my hand over her stomach and held onto her waist while I kissed her –trying to not be too forceful, though I was feeling a little more…urgent… as time went by.  Well, all right, I was hard as a rock.  I kept pulling back a little with my hips, because I didn’t want to be grinding up against her.  I mean, I did want to, but I wasn’t ready to give her a proper wedding night now – I needed to prepare first.
My fingers snuck underneath the hem of her shirt just a little – just so I could feel her skin.  Bella pushed me back a bit, and I cringed, sure I had overstepped whatever boundaries there were.  She raised herself up a little then grabbed the end of her shirt and pulled it up over her head.
“Jesus,” I whispered.  I was completely unable to take my eyes away from her breasts.  I’d seen them before – touched them, tasted them – but they seemed different than I remembered.  More beautiful, more symmetrical, more generally fucking perfect.
Bella’s hands reached for my biceps and pulled me back down over her, bringing my lips back to hers.  My hand went back to her waist, then tentatively up a little – just farther along her side.  Frankly, I was scared shitless to touch them.  Once I did I’d probably lose all sense, and then I’d fucked up my plan for tomorrow – whatever the hell that was going to be.
Apparently, Bella was going to have none of that, though, because she let go of my arm, grabbed my hand, and moved it right over the top of her right breast.  I cursed into her mouth, because I couldn’t properly speak with my tongue running around in there.  It was so soft and round, and when I gripped it just a little she moaned.  I ran my thumb over the nipple, feeling it harden with my touch.  Bella’s hands were all over me – up over my shoulders, my back, down to my stomach.  Her fingers tickled over my abs, and between that and the fall night breeze coming in through the windows, my skin rose up in gooseflesh.
Then her hand abruptly dropped lower.
And it wrapped around my cock.
Oh God…
She stroked it from base to tip, then back again.
And I just about lost my mind.
Not much of a loss, though, right?
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Chapter end notes:
Ohhh...Doofy...will you be able to cope with this?
I should have another update out later today.  


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61 comments:

  1. Finally some action for poor baby Doofy!

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  2. Holy shit, she isn't taking any prisoners. I love how she, the virgin, is taking control and leading him.

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  3. Well you said, "gropage" and I hauled ass. :)

    Poor Doofy. He was scared to touch the bewbies!

    And Bella is determined. Go girl!

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  4. Hitchy *crazy for THG*May 4, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    COCKBLOCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    There. I finally said it. That felt good to get out of my system.

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  5. Hey, he's a lot smarter than he thinks; he is just socially challenged. Edward may have an unplanned plan for tomorrow, but I think Bella has a plan tonight. Poor Edward! He does not have a chance! I loved this chapter! It left me with a smile.

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  6. thanks for the update.
    :)

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  7. Bella is being a little aggressive! Too funny! Didn't think she had it in her! Ready to see where this leads!

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  8. Awesome for Edward. A step on the right direction, right?

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  9. May the 4th be with you as well, Savage!

    And THANK ALL THAT IS GOOD AND HOLY that someone is finally touching Doofy's cock aside from Doofy. For serious. GodDAMN.

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  10. Look at that you've inspired people to name calling of you, ha ha.
    Okay, hilarious train of thought-- her on the swim team while kissing.
    You crack me up.

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  11. Yeah cockblocked for sure. You are so mean *pouts*
    Thanks for the update ;)

    Stephanie

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  12. Poor dear...he has so LITTLE mind to lose!~ But she does appear to be making his mind GO...

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  13. Awe thanks for that. Loved the mid-day update. That was great. Hope things continue from where they left off, when you give us a little more tonight.

    Does she realize just how much he cares for her... that he is falling in-love with her? She must realize that he is trying so hard not to over step... that he is leaving the pace up to her? I hope he tells her about the severe pain in his chest and burning behind his eyes, acid reflex and shortness of breath and panic he feels whenever he thinks of being separated from her. Bella would be able to tell him what it all means, right?

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  14. You're killing me!
    Thanks for the update.

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  15. Aaaaahhhhh!!!!! Poor Doofy, he's so confused, talk about mixed signals! Half an hour ago he was saying Bella good bye and now she's giving him a handjob! Damn, I wanna know what happens next NOW! LOL

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  16. God! You get us all reved up and stop! You are just cruel. I like him....he's so cute cuz he is so out of his element, doesn't know what to do next! Gimme some more please!

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  17. Wow! I looked after I made my comment and I was going to call you a cockblocker, but I was trying to be nice....so I guess everyone else did it for me. lol

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  18. Hahahahaha! Well played Savage. lmao, he is seriously gonna lose his shit! Like he's gonna burst into flames or something Great chapter .

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  19. Finally! I love it.

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  20. Hmm, I wonder what, or who, will cock-block poor ol' Doofy next! Or is this it - are you finally going to reward him for trying his best? Have pity on him - and us ... please!

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  21. OMG, you are sooooo mean!

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  22. colleen_weddellMay 4, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    I love Bella being in charge - can you just let her do it already!!!

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  23. colleen_weddellMay 4, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    I love Bella being in charge - can you just let her do it already!!!

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  24. looks like Doofus may get something better than a Scooby Snack.... Will he try to stick to his birthday plan for her or is Bella going to make him give up the goods.?? looking forward to finding out..

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  25. Gah! What a place to leave us! Will this turn into actual make up sex or will Doofie put the brakes on again? Waiting with bated breath and all that...

    (And Star Wars Day?! Sheesh, what a terrible pun!!) XD

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  26. yep, a fml tease and that too!!!

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  27. First - loved the swim team comment - boy, his mind focuses on weird things at the weirdest times.
    Second - I'm really surprised at how forward Bella is being. For a shy, virginal girl, she's really getting into the foreplay here! Anxious to see how far you'll let it go before the cockblocking commences - again!

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  28. OH bella you dirty slut! hope you plan on keep if you going to play with him, keep in mind a cock just not for chrismase, or you birthday in this case:)

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  29. austenbrontemeyerMay 4, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    Well, yes, I AGREEEEEEEEEARGGGGG *whines*

    And this coming from the girl who makes certain clandestine comments concerning papercuts...Hmmmmm.

    A bread crumb of commitment...

    I worrrrrrrrrrry about themmmmm *whines*.

    All day, cabs, airports, I set my laptop on the bar at my hotel to make sure they are ok and still together. Bartenders scowl!

    Caught myself ordering Scotch! Yeechhh.

    During a meeting about whether or not running the last mug shot of OBL is morally justified. (YES in my opinion which I can safely post here- the world needs to see it to breath easier) I am reading! Hoping someone is not looking over my shoulder.

    Yeah fill my water and just GO. :)

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  30. It's not nice to leave us hanging like that I look forward to the next bit. I'm getting a bit cranky.

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  31. nothing comes too easy for those two... so i'm expecting a supercharged cockblock next chapter :D

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  32. what a tease you are... some how i know they aren't going to get anywhere again!!!

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  33. I just love being in Doofy's head, his freaking funny :) Can't wait to read more !

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  34. haha not much of a loss right?!!! he's so funny and sexy and he's sooooo close!! and you just cockblocked us!! you are soooooo mean!!lol! mmmm loved it a can't wait for later today!

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  35. Woo Hoo!!!! They are finally getting something started, please do not have Lee show up again!! I am begging you! Loved the chapter can't wait for the next update.

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  36. Finally I can fucking reply!!! I have absute enjoyed the last couple of chapters. It has been amazing and suspenseful and worrisome and down right fucking tears in my damn eyes. Doofus you're growing up on me. Who is this man before me getting felt up by a bold litte sex kitten. Doofus is your hear finally beating?

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  37. don't think he'll be able to resist her anymore, but i guess you shouldn't underestimate him because he's surprised us before :)

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  38. Oh my oh my!!!!! She has a mission in her mind and apparently nothing is going to stop her, not even him. Not that he wants to. He prepared thoroughly, he can back down now!!!!

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  39. That was freaking hot!!!!

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  40. OH COME ON! Don't leave us hangin' here. Damn. At least their still getting some action while we're here waiting and waiting...

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  41. Evil!!!! LMAO Pure evilness!!! Do I really need to say that I cannot wait to read what happens next? Duh!

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  42. I must be retarded. I could not figure out how to comment on 71 so I'm back to 70 to comment. J'adore vou! J'taime vou. Ok, that's all I can remember from 3 years of French 100 years ago! Merci boucoup! (sp?)

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  43. Oh boy... why do I have the feeling he's at that moment right before he does something silly :)

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  44. I love this shy awkwardness. It's rather sweet.

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  45. Holy shizz...what happened? She just slapped him in the face, and now she has his cock in her hand? Wow......fast work, girl!

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  46. Wow, Bella seems determined to turn this into their wedding night...
    I think he doesn't stand a chance against her...especially since the sensual & emotional overload has practically fried his brain cells...LOL!
    It is magical to see how every touch gained a whole new meaning for him.
    Everything goes through the heart this time.

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  47. This story will be the end of me Savage. I have loved every moment of it, but your continous cockblocking is beyond just plain teasing!! Poor Doofus to I'm not sure he can handle the build up much longer!

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  48. OMG U COCKBLOCKED UR OWN CHARACTERS *GLARES*
    he was planing on giving her their wedding night 2moro ???? is that 2moro for us too .. i don;'t know what i'll do if u cockblock them again ......

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  49. Oh la coquine!!!

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  50. Holy cum fuck Batman! Things are getting hot and heavy in a crazy sexy way. Will Edward blow his load early?

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  51. hahaha. bella just went there!

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  52. Bella has always been hormonal.  

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  53. So wats gonna b da COCKBLACK dis time?!?!? NOTHING I HOPE!!! Lets giv Eddie this one, he deserves it. He's really been tryin n plus he's fallin HARDDDDDDD for da chic....i wonder if she realizes jus hw much tho?!?!? Does she understand jus wat he's sayin wit his restraints?!?!?


    Ohhhh, dis iz gunna b gud...............i can already tell!!!!!!!!

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  54. *fans self frantically* Well damn. 

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  55. Men always seem to loose their minds when they are being 'handled'.

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  56. I'm still not sure that anyone in Bella's situation would be able to feel this way about the man that bought her x fake it? Yes! Actually feel it? No!! As this is fiction however i'll let it slide lol x

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  57. Love aggressive Bella!

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  58. Finally I can fucking reply!!! I have absute enjoyed the last couple of chapters. It has been amazing and suspenseful and worrisome and down right fucking tears in my damn eyes. Doofus you're growing up on me. Who is this man before me getting felt up by a bold litte sex kitten. Doofus is your hear finally beating?

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  59. Hmmm lemony goodness up ahead!

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