Thursday, May 5, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 72

Author's Notes:
Hmm...  I might not have anything to say.
Bella liked dirty talk. 
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Chapter 72
I felt my heart start beating again as Bella slowly nodded her head at me.  As my left hand pushed past the hem of her sweats, my right hand reached back behind her head, bringing her up towards me so I could keep kissing her.  I was really, really afraid of freaking her out – she hadn’t had a nightmare for several days, and I didn’t want to do anything that might trigger another one.  I had no idea what all had been done to her while she was with Aro and James, and I was still too scared to ask her.
I kissed her slowly while my hand delved through the soft hair under her pants, pushing just two of my fingers farther down, underneath the elastic of her panties, stroking over her clit.  She moaned a little, and I moved down more, honestly surprised by how much moisture there was to be found there already.  The tips of my fingers ran around the outside of her entrance, just gathering the wetness there before bringing them back up and slowly circling around her clit.
Bella gasped and her head tilted back, breaking her lips away from mine.
“You like that?” I ask with a bit of a smile.  For the first time since she kissed me in Germany, I felt like I knew what I was doing.  This was something I was good at – at least according to the other women I had known.
“Yes,” she said softly, not looking at me.  Her cheeks turned pink, and I cupped her chin in my hand.
“If I do anything you don’t like, you have to tell me,” I said with more vehemence than I intended.  I took a deep breath.  “Tell me if you like what I’m doing as well, okay?”
“Okay,” she said quietly.  Her eyes blinked a few times, and I kept watching them as I ran my fingers over her again.  Her eyes widened, and her mouth opened just a little as her breath became more shallow and quickened.
I kissed up her jaw again, moving slowly up to her ear.  I sucked on the lobe while my fingers glided over her soft flesh.  I felt her hips tip up a little, and increased the pressure as I touched her clit.  She looked absolutely stunning when I looked up at her face, with her eyes mostly closed.  I kissed down to her shoulder, running my tongue over her warm skin, and then blowing softly until she shivered.
My hand rocked back and forth, and I took cues from her expression and the pace of her hips moving against me.  One of Bella’s hands gripped my shoulder while the other laced into my hair.  I brought my lips back to her mouth, lightly tracing her lips with my tongue while my fingers slid up and down.
My middle finger circled her opening, softly running around the moist edge.  Carefully, I slipped it inside just a little ways, and my eyes squeezed tight as I felt her flesh surrounding it.  Bella gasped again, and I had to look up to make sure she was okay.  I’d never been with a virgin – never – and coupling that with not knowing what they had done to her before…well, apprehension didn’t even begin to describe what I felt.  Thankfully, Bella was there to set me straight.  Her eyes darted over to mine.
“That feels good,” she whispered. 
“You sure?”
“Oh yes.”
I nodded and pulled my finger back out, and then pushed it inside of her again, a little farther this time.  I had no idea what I was expecting – an actual, physical barrier blocking even my finger from going in? I knew she was tight – no fucking doubt about that – even my finger felt constricted inside of her.  I shifted positions a little, pushing it up farther, and then bringing it back out to circle around her clit again.
Bella’s hips bucked up against me, effectively pushing my whole hand against her sensitive flesh.
“You want more of that, baby?” I whispered into her ear.  Bella moaned in response.  “You like my finger in you?”
“Oh God…Edward…”  Her eyes had gone all wide and wild, and when she looked at me I couldn’t help but smirk.  Definitely a smirk, not a smile.  Bella liked dirty talk.  Yeah – I could definitely work with that.
“How does that feel, baby?” I asked her as I slid my finger inside of her, feeling less resistance this time.  “You want more of that, don’t you?”
“Mmmm…hmmm…”
I flicked my tongue over her nipple, and her whole body jumped.  She landed back on the mattress with her head back and her neck arched.  Her hips pushed against my hand, driving my middle finger completely inside of her.  Her cheeks and neck flushed pink, and her chest began to rise and fall as she angled her hips and started moving faster with me.
So fucking beautiful.
My thumb went to her clit, stroking it and wetting it with her own moisture as she continued writhe against the bed.
“You feel so good in side.”  I licked and sucked at her nipple, then moved to the other one.  “I can’t wait until my cock’s inside of you, stroking you just like my finger is now.”
“Oh…fuck…Edward…”
“Don’t you say my name until you scream it,” I murmured into her ear before I went back to her nipples again, biting lightly and humming against them.  I moved my finger all the way in side of her, then back out again before I held it right next to my index finger, and slowly pushed both in together as my thumb pushed down against her clit – hard.
Bella’s entire body seemed to react at once.  Her hips pushed against my hand, her back arched, which made her hardened nipples practically stab holes in the ceiling, and a shudder ran from her body from top to bottom.  Her eyes were closed, her mouth open, and when my name came out of her mouth this time, it came out as a wail, and my fingers were squeezed together inside of her.
She was the most incredible sight I had ever seen.
Even when her fingernails dug into the flesh on my shoulder, it just felt good.
Pulling my fingers from her, I slowly caressed over her for a minute before running my hand back up through her short, soft hair, across her stomach and around to her waist.  I pulled her close to me, kissing her shoulder and her neck as I went.  I finally looked up into her glowing eyes.
I finally got something right, right?
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Chapter end notes:
I may still be cock-blocking, but at least the clit's been set free?
ROFL
Come say HI on the forum, and console all those who were on the "TDC" stint.

64 comments:

  1. Yikes! I owe Doofus an apology. He makes Bella (and me) squirm good. Very nice. Verrrry nice.

    Wonder if that was B's first O? Nothing like the first one....I remember.

    xx

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  2. from now on i will refer to girls coming as clits being set free. priceless.

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  3. WOW! Congrats Doofus! You finally did something right!

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  4. Yes, he definitely did something right.

    ;)

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  5. oh...fuck...jada!!! he's coming around for sure.

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  6. he had to be good at something, right?
    btw, i am awful with acronyms.
    what is TDC?

    thanks.

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  7. Yes. Even though you are totally making fun of us on TDC, we need consoling, Savage. I hope they bring pretty pictures of Rob.

    I changed my mind and had the first smoke ever for Bella's orgasm. Going w/Doofy's stratagy and thinking "Hers is more important."

    Thanks for the chapter, twas great.

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  8. OMFG! I loved it!

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  9. Smexy. Um, dufus, are you busy tonight? Care to come visit me? Hehe. Too bad I'm really so not joking

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  10. See he is not as lost as we thought. Loved it.

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  11. such a good doofus.... he may have to get a whole box of scooby snacks for that!!. Glad Edward was finally able to find his 'comfort zone' again... right?... Pam B.

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  12. I'm so proud of you Doofus ! That was really hot ! That was right for sure :)

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  13. ALRIGHT Edward :) I really loved it! Go Edward! PS, dirty talking is HOT ;)

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  14. Oh Doofy finally getting it right, right?

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  15. Oh Doofy finally getting it right, right?

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  16. Yip. He sure did. I can't help but wonder what he'll do for her birthday - I really hope he manages to create something special. I think he can.

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  17. Holymotherofallorgasims, yea I'd say he did something right. whoa.

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  18. Oh yes, baby, you did something very right! *fans self*

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  19. 'Bella liked dirty talk.' Well, duh. I'd like it too if it were coming from Edward. I'm so glad that he got this right. Sexy times FTW.

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  20. Definitely right, Edward. Definitely right.

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  21. Ok, OK...that was REALLY hawt! You have redeemed yourself, and I will never call you a cockblocker again! Promise!!!! LOL!

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  22. Wow Eddie is learning to think before he speaks, and that ACTIONS of any kind speak louder than words....

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  23. Edward is just too adorable, getting his confidence back that was awesome :)

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  24. Okay, that was seriously worth the wait. I don't know if it was all the waiting (to use the polite word for it), or the fact that it had its own chapter, or something else entirely...but that was sooooooo sexy. *fans self furiously* Doofus gets a big-ass Scooby snack for this one!

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  25. hey bb!!! .... the clit's FREEEEEEEEEEEEE ..... tomorrow, right? *mwah*.. thanks bb!!

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  26. Well that went well. So glad Bella responded to his touch... as of course she would under normal circumstances, its just we don't know what James and Aro did to her or what might remind her of what they did to her... or what she had to do to them. I'm so glad she hasn't been dreaming... hope that doesn't change after tonight. So glad he wanted to bring her pleasure and then brought her close to him and held her tight... can't get much more romantic than that. I think he's definately learning. Loved it. Let there be more intimacy and trust and enjoying each other and getting closer please. They still have so much to sort out.

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  27. Yep, got it right doofus. See He can do good. He said women have told him he's good at sex and he learned that. He learned how to be a businessman so he can learn about relationships too. He has google. :)

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  28. this article might give you some ideas. i work at a sexuality resource center owned by a doctor and a social worker.
    http://awomanstouchonline.com/sex_counselor.php?articleID=3239

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  29. Am I the only one who's paranoid that she was set off in the wrong way?? I thunk I'm over-worrying. Well, at least his patience is paying off for the of-age bday tomorrow... Nicely done, btw. Sweet dreams! :D

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  30. omg that was soooo frickin hawwwwwwt!! *panting furiously* and they haven't even actually had sex yet!!! what are you doing to me..omg don't stop!!lol! and he's soooo thoughtful in this chapter he so fucking sexy and love dirty talking edward!!lol! now that the clit is set free we need the peen released!!lol! loved it! *fans oneself*

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  31. That was awesome! They have got to figure out a way to stay together. Bella would not be wanting this with him, or a wedding night, if she did not really care for him, especially after all she has been through. I think if they put their heads together they can figure something out. In the meantime, I am thoroughly enjoying their time together. Really looking forward to her birthday!

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  32. Congrats Edward! You finally did something right! That a boy...LOL!

    So Bella likes the dirty talk...from now on things can only get better! :)

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  33. looks like b may be more ready than e

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  34. Doofus has earned himself a whole bag of Scooby snacks for this. I loved that he made this all about her.

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  35. Loved this:
    "hardened nipples practically stab holes in the ceiling"

    What an image ;-)

    Doofy gets a Bella o as his reward. I think he deserves more than Scooby snacks for this one *snicker*

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  36. For just about anything... :)

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  37. Ungh. Yes. You done good, doofy. Real fucking good.


    Not only was the "clit freeing" (lmao) but we got some dirty talk as well.



    Thanks, this was a verah verah nice start to my morning ;)


    jsyk, I'm still in mourning over the loss of TDC *sniff* :'( That's a little morbid.

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  38. Wow! Thank you! Could you please create a little worm hole and send this to me when I was 16? LOL

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  39. I may make you wait, but I won't let you down in the end. Well...probably not. Maybe. Sometimes. Damn. :)

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  40. Team Dead Charlie. A bunch of ladies on the thread thought if Charlie was dead, B&E had a better chance. :)

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  41. Edward is so attentive all the time! One of my favourite moments is: "I couldn’t help but smirk. Definitely a smirk, not a smile. Bella liked dirty talk. Yeah – I could definitely work with that." - Edward is so pleased with himself :).
    Also “Don’t you say my name until you scream it” - dominant, confident, sexy Edward!

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  42. OMFG! Clitts being set free! Never heard that one! Love it! Yea, sound like he got something right! Good job Doofus! Your coming around!

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  43. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW .. awesome chapter
    im just SOOOOO happy he's feeling good for a change .. :))

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  44. It's about time. Edward is finally doing something right.

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  45. austenbrontemeyerMay 6, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    What?! Damn, I missed it in the ER yesterday after sprawling ass over head with 3 suitcases. Godamn bellman no where to be found. Had Strawberry daquiris while waiting for cab with cute knight who picked me up off the floor. ; ) so not all bad but sorry to have missed yummily fun sensitiveward!

    So confident now, who knew Badassward has a sensitive fun side too, mmmm.

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  46. Holy hell! He gives good hand! May be a duffus in other things but HANDS DOWN - good hand!

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  47. ~blowsafewsmokerings~ Oh thankyousavagethatwasgoodformetoobb....

    I think we were held captive like a bunch of thralls long enough and whew... her (our) 'release' was finally coaxed out of our reluctant hero cum celibate against his will long enough (sic) and now he can and will (oh please oh please oh please) manfully meet his wedding night promise if only to out of obligation to her recovery and oh the sacrifices one must make for the sake of love and redemption... well I guess it is better than throwing her into a volcano. See ... we are making progress as a society all you hater and master baiters....

    I am eager to see who is teaching who since he seems to be getting tutored on the finer 'points' and tight moments, non?
    Molto Bella.

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  48. love it love the clit being set free!!! at least you didn't take two chapters from bella to come!!! can't wait to keep reading!

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  49. Such a phrase you came up with... Clits set free.... There's not much to say but wow OMG wow, perhaps speach will eventually return, with any luck itmwill be sooner rather than later, meanwhile... Bella an joint the team and help out "personally"

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  50. ROTF @ the clit being set free! I can just think that is what Mel Gibson was thinking when he yelled "freedom" in Braveheart! Yeah, I am sure it! LOL!

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  51. hahaha! alright! you go edward!

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  52. Oh hell yes! Exactly what they both needed!

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  53. Edwards EternalMay 7, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    Oh Doofus.. so proud of yourself...excellent chapter !! CSF !! Oh my... hope it doesn't go rogue on him... heh heh heh

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  54. Finally did something right.  

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  55.  CLIT FREEDOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahaahahaaaaaaaa, well aint that something!!!!!! They both needed that........an i cant help but shudder to tink about wats comin next or for B's bday!!!!!!!!!

    B's 1st time started off well enuff............LETS CONTINUE, SHALL WE?!?!?

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  56. Well I guess that proves it, she is 'ready' like she said.

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  57. She trusts him which is huge!!!  Tommorow right????

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  58. Edward definitely got something right.

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  59. "don't you say my name till you scream it!"

    .... Oh god yes!!

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  60. Dramatic music...... The clouds part and rays of sun shine down...... Then a voice speaks from the sky....... Release the clitoris!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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