Friday, May 13, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 81

Author’s notes
And….they have sex, and then it’s the next morning, and then the hotel blows up.  The end.
OK, not really.
Edward was here…
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Chapter 81
“You…you want to do that?” Bella said quietly.
“I don’t have to,” I said quickly.  “Only if you want me to.”
“You don’t have to,” she said.  “I mean, I can’t imagine you would want to…”
“Bella, I want to,” I assured her.  “I want to go down on you, but I won’t if you don’t want it.”
Her brows tried to merge together.
“You…like that?”
“Just thinking about going down on you has me so hard I could probably drill through the wall.”
“Really?” she both looked and sounded surprised.
“Definitely.”
Bella chewed on her lip some more.  I was starting to get a little jealous, and considered forgetting the whole cunnilingus thing and just start nibbling her lips instead.
“Okay,” she finally said.
“You sure?” I asked.  She nodded, and seemed to be serious, so I kissed her belly once more before I starting trailing my lips over her smooth, pink skin.  My hands slid down her calves, grabbing her ankles and pushing them up closer to her body, which made her hips raise up a bit and put her on display for me.
So fucking beautiful.
I slid my arms under her legs, angling her up a little to give me better access.  I licked my lips once, kissed the inside of her left thigh, then moved in.
As soon as I tasted her, I knew I would never, ever be able to get enough.  I moaned against her, and I could feel the vibrations as they passed to her skin.  Bella’s hips pushed up as she gasped.
“Oh my God…”
“You like that?” I murmured against her skin, causing more vibrations.
“Ugh!  Yes!  Yes!”  Her hands reached down and gripped into my hair.
My tongue touched her, tasted her, explored her, and generally had a really fucking good time.  I could feel and hear her reactions to what I was doing without looking up to see her expression.  I did glance at her a couple of times, but her head was back against the pillow and her neck was arched, so I couldn’t see her eyes anyway.  I might have liked to see them as I did this to her, but mostly I just wanted to know that she was liking it, and she obviously was, so I kept it up – dipping my tongue inside of her and swirling it around before dragging it back up to her clit.  I circled, pushed, hummed, and even drew my name with my tongue over her clit.
Edward was here…
I knew she was close when her thighs tried to squeeze my head, and I had to grip them a little tighter to keep her open for me.  She started chanting my name, which caused me to increase my speed, trying to match the tempo she set with the slight rocking of her hips.  I gripped her backside with my hands to hold her a little closer and continued the tongue dance over her beautiful pussy.
I pushed the tip of my tongue hard against the throbbing little nub, and Bella nearly came right off the bed as she cried out, gripping my hair tightly as her hips pushed against my face.  I kept circling my tongue as best I could, feeling her moisture all around me, tasting how fucking sweet she was as she dropped back down to the mattress, moaning.
The pace of my licks slowed, and I switched from using the tip to using the top, laving over her clit, just to give it one slow, last pass before trailing down to her entrance.  I circled her there once, just making sure she was wet enough to make it easy to get inside of her, before I pulled my arms out from under her backside and pushing myself up.  I wiped the back of my hand across my lips and looked up to Bella with a smile.  Her eyes were wide, and she was still panting a little.
“So good,” I said.  I hoped she believed me, and that she didn’t think I was just saying it because she wanted to hear it.  I wasn’t just saying it.  I would do that again and again – for as long as she would let me.
Because nothing could taste sweeter, right?
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Chapter end notes:
I want Edward to write that on my clit…
One O down, at least one more to go!
It’s definitely time for a pineapple and mushroom pizza.  I still feel all deprived from last week and the infiltration of Chinese carry out into my normal Friday routine. 
Talking about rickets on twitter…and pizza…and penises.  Why does it always come back to penises??

70 comments:

  1.  OMG doofusward has some serious oral skills *ded*

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  2. GAH!!! THE CUNNI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. "Edward was here", that was awesome!  So far so good.  So far he has been awesome.  I am pretty sure that by midnight Bella will be saying "Best Birthday ever!"  I know that is what I would say! 

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  4. Because penises rule the world??

    Lol oh my gahhhh I wish his tongue write all over me!!
    I'm enjoying Rob's birthday so much! TTY

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  5. I am a lucky bitch b/c my husband likes oral like your Edward did right here.  Nothing like a man who likes goin' downtown.

    Doofy is impressing me with his loving thoughts and oral skills.  He needs to re-do his resume, I think.  I'm pretty sure that his previous one is out-of-date and doesn't really highlight his real skill set.

    Thank you for the chapter.  Off to have a drink.

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  6. why does it always come back to penises?
    well you can look at it, touch it, lick it, swallow it (almost) and it can make you come if used wisely...and *bonus* it doesn't make you gain any weight...hmm...unless you want it too... ;p

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  7. Whoa! signed his name on her clit? holycrapdude!  

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  8.  "Edward was here"! LMFAO!!!! 

    mmmm I'd LOVE some pineapple mushroom pizza right now.... 

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  9.  i so love this edward were can i pick one up? wish he came free with the story:(
    love this chapter by far on of the best. loveing this story so much just when i think it cant get any better it get better.  Please think about truning this into a book as i would buy it with or without the free edward :) even better turn it into a film.

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  10. Your Edward is quite skilled..woohoo! That ought to boost his confidence a bit...and Bella will never let him go now, no way..lol
    I will never forget the "Edward was here" line....hilarious!
    Thanks :)

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  11.  One word...... Dayum!!!!!! I hope the next chapter is soon!!!!

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  12.  God, I want him to write the entire bible on me, down there, what a holy O!!! LOL

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  13. because penises are grrrrrrrrrreat!!  When used properly!  Pineapple and mushroom huh? Have to try that one.  Oh and Bella is liking the oral..I don't blame her.  Next up....pen..e...tra...tion...penis penitration! Yes!

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  14. plus a penis will never talk back to you.  it might spit in your eye, but it will never talk back! 

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  15. I knew I had to get my ass home first to read this UD. Can't be reading this shit at work. And I was right. Gah. Fucking hell-- I circled, pushed, hummed, and even drew my name with my tongue over her clit.Edward was here… Yes yes yes! I will have an order of that to go please.

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  16. More more!! Love it!

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  17. How far he already came, caring for Bella that much and his vocabulary knowledge WOW
     
    I also like one who writes Edward was here J
     

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  18. Deep breaths...  Okay, yeah.  I was puzzling over what the teaser 'Edward was here' could mean...until I saw it in context, and I was like OH.  *Nods head eagerly*  Yep, he can write that on mine anytime he wants.  ;-)

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  19.  Dude can spell the E and I will be in heaven

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  20. Hitchy *crazy for THG*May 13, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Edward was here. 

    Epic.   

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  21. I love it. Lets hope that Edward can keep it up. 

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  22. As long as he used long hand to write his name on my clit I'd be happy too!  Hell - I'd demand the declaration of independence! 

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  23. Holy shit!  Who thinks about writing his name on her clit?  OMG....Edward (Rob) can write his name on me anywhere he choses!  LOL!   

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  24. OMG! I want Edward to do that to me ;) 

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  25.  Oh!!! I want him to write it there too!!! And I can think of a some other places he could practice his writing also ;)

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  26. I would hope the penises keep cumming back!  ;D

    Ooooh, that pizza sounds divine!!!  Damn, no delivery on this damn rock!  Ggrrrrr!   Well, hope you enjoyed it double for the rest of us.  :D  Though after that I think I might just need to take up smoking, js.  Bravo.

    Loved this, "My tongue touched her, tasted her, explored her, and generally had a really fucking good time."
    ...especially the second part of the sentence!!  *mwha*  Maybe he should ask her if he can get her a tattoo just above her pubic bone that points down and says "Playground Entrance"  or just " Edward's Fun World"?   *enormous grin*

    Yup, now she understands!  Hope there's a bit of healing in comprehension!  :)  (That's not to say that I want her to suddenly want to go down on him.)  So glad she got to see that it's supposed to be a loving and pleasurable thing... for both partners though, not based in fear and pain.

    Oh, and I sooooo want an Edward to write that on mine as well!!!  :thud:  Probs one of the best first time male on female oral's I've ever read,  adored the realism you bring!!

    Thanks!!!

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  27.  So good :)  I never have enough of your Doofus !

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  28. ummmmm. Mark me as yours anytime. Write your name all ooooover me. Perfect lines. dipping my tongue inside of her and swirling it around before dragging it back up to her clit.  I circled, pushed, hummed, and even drew my name with my tongue over her clit.
    Edward was here… 

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  29. Damn.., that was just hot! Cold shower for me!

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  30. Wha...  whe...  uhh....  Fuck it.  I'm done. 

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  31. LOLOLOLOL!  I just re-read that, and NO, I wasn't messin' around downtown!  I swear I meant 'I'm done' as in 'I'm done trying to be coherent after envisionsing Edward writing his name on my clit with his tongue.'  PLEASE Don't tell my husband I said that... lol. 

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  32. So good!! i ready for the main course!! Its Dinner time!
    Marie
    twicrazreader

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  33. Oh Doofus... you are actually using your mad skills for good this time....
    Excellent few chapters Savage....Loving it !!
     

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  34. Writing "Edward was here" was so funny when i was reading it, but somehow funny was not what was going through my mind when i thought about it a little further. Damn girl!! 

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  35. That was short, hot, messy and OMFG perfect.
    And now I want a " Edward's Fun World" tattoo with Oralward included!

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  36. Edward was here. LMAO!!!

    Roshambo

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  37. When you said at least one more to go I was so hoping you meant tonight. I think her mouth and her breasts might be feeling a little lonely... deprived of his beautiful tongue. I am so glad you were able to post these, but boy what a place to leave it. Hope you have an enjoyable rest of Rob's 25th birthday and that Eddie has some more pleasure in store for his Bella and for him too. Why do I feel like having a tall frosted glass of white wine? Oh yeah to Cheer you on and to celebrate Rob and you and start the celebration for Eddie and Bella making love for the first time and hopefully not the last time. Or maybe it is time for me to hit the hay? It's after eleven here in T.O. I don't know but I look forward to your next post and surely the one after that and the one after that...and the one after that, before any mahem ensues. Cheers! And thanks.

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  38. SUPER COCK BLOCKEDMay 13, 2011 at 10:48 PM

     i have a new award for you THE BEST COCKBLOCKING EVER .GOES FOR YOU!  haha. 

    DAMN U GIRL . THAT WAS ................................................. ____________________

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  39.  "Edward was here" - I can't imagine how you come up with these hilarious lines, which don't change the mood of the stressful, emotional scenes in the story, but at the same time don't let the tone to remain dramatic or angsty throughout the entire scenes and make it easier and great fun to read. 

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  40. Silly girl Bella....like you even needed to question if you would like Edward to go down on you!!!!

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  41. I'm fairly sure I would want him to be a little more formal .... and spell out Edward Anthony Masen Cullen ... even if he's not a Masen .... that could just be a bonus. 

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  42. oh bella luck little #!%@& 

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  43. omfg i would have him write.."edward was here and anywhere else you'd like him to be"...lol!! mmmm frickin bella has all the luck!! whoa now roll on O number two!! *fanning oneself while panting* 

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  44.  *dead* that was SO good .. SO good
    but u'r still evil .. they HAVE to get to finally have sex by next chapter , right ?????
    u can't delay it any longer

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  45. Edward, you can take a bow now. applause applause. And please after that performance bring on the encore. 
    I'm so happy for Bella to get to experience some of the finer things in life & Edward tongue graffiti would definitely qualify.
    Shae, the lemon queen. I bow down.

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  46. That beautiful ass man could write this entire fic on my clit any day!!! I loved it and so cant wait until the next update! 

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  47.  "Edward tongue graffiti" - ROFLMAO!!!

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  48. lol, yep amen to that.... plus it salutes you just with a little touch... no need to argue too much...

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  49. well didn't get the alert for this one!  glad i went back a chappie to make sure so i didn't read backwards.
    damn you are right ed can write anything he wants on my body parts with his tongue.. bella i know you were tourtured and stuff but honey you are a very lucky girl right now!!! 

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  50. Crap, only one chapter left.  

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  51. Did he just think his tongue had a good time? LOL


    My brain's all smutted out now....because Edward was here, obviously! :)
     

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  52.  EDWARD CULLEN WAZ FUKIN HERE *pun definitely intended*


    dat chapt was soooooooooo fcukin gud, i cant fcukin believ hw gud dat was.....i also cant fcukin believ dat i cant stop sayin FCUKIN rite now.........
    Eddie is really impressive usin his tactics that he wud usually have used for the gud. ole fashioned frequent fcuk wid his past women an transformin in into a VIGIN's HEAVEN!!!!! i mean....first time n she already got 1 way ORAL.......wat else cud a girl ask for.....*beside the full works tho* which i hav no worries cuz i kno its comin!!!!!It also helps that they both really really feel for each othr....SO FCUKIN PERFECT!!!! there i go wid the fcukin nonsense again!!!!! 

    OK OK, all that aside, time for Eddie's CAPITAL O!!!!!
    Shall we?!!?! an ps...dat have sex n hotel blows up in the mornin bit was NOT FUNNY OK!!!!!!! u cant do dat 2 us.............hahahahahaaaa *ok, it was a lil funny*

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  53. It wouldn't be any fun if it didn't come back to penises. Such is life. 

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  54. There should be a 'Edward was here' stamp 

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  55. Yummy! Next chapter ^_-

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  56.  Ohhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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  57. Pineapple and mushroom?? You weirdo!! I don't get the concept of cooked fruit at all...just saying!!  Keep the penises coming I say... I'm all for more penis!
    Great chapter!!

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  58. I knew she'd let him and it was oh so good. Time to round home and go all the way!

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  59. "Edward was here..." freaking killed me!

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  60. Edward was here . . . love it !!!

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  61. I think a lot of your readers including me would like that written on theirs too.

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  62. Edward was here. LMAO!!!

    Roshambo

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  63. Mmm... That was satisfying... Next! Mmm... Penises! Or is it peni?

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