Tuesday, April 19, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 48

Author’s Notes:
Mind your Ps and Qs – wow, what a lot of different answers I got!! Pints and Quarts (for pub owners to keep track of my much patrons had to drink) and the letters p and q on manual typeset printing, and a couple of others as well. I always heard the Pints and Quarts answer myself. Interesting info from everyone. I have to throw in a couple more phrases and see what kind of fun answers people have!



Chapter 48



I didn’t sleep much on the plane – I never could get comfortable sleeping in a seat like that. Bella’s sleep was restless at best, but she seemed to get a couple of hours rest. I kept holding on to her, afraid to let go, though I wasn’t sure exactly why. Maybe I thought this would be the last time she would let me hold on to her like this, because she really didn’t have to put up with my shit much longer, or maybe it was because I thought she would cry again if I stopped, and I didn’t want to see her crying any more.



At least this seemed to work, as opposed to any moronic words that came out of my mouth. Maybe I should give up on speaking all together. I wondered if that was the reason men in family sit-coms would grunt in response to anything anyone said, instead of actually talk. I could work with that.



Bella woke when the plane started to descend, and sat up, effectively removing herself from my embrace. She rubbed at her red eyes and shoved wild strands of hair behind her ears as she tried to smooth it all down. She glanced at me, and her cheeks turned pink as she looked quickly away, and I wondered what in the world would have made her blush.



We landed, made our way off the plane and to our hotel. I wanted to get settled in before I went for the killings. I checked in with Alice, and she informed me my guns were on the way. Five minutes later, there was a knock at the door. I hadn’t ordered any room service, but I let the guy with the tray walk in anyway. After closing the door, he lifted the silver tray and exposed the half-dozen hand guns he had underneath.



“Sweet,” I said with a crooked smile. I tipped the guy really well, lit a cigarette, and started going over each of the guns while Bella sat on the couch in the suite and watched me. She hadn’t said much of anything, though she didn’t appear to be giving me the silent treatment any longer. I ordered some actual room service so she would have something to eat, but she only picked at it.



“Not much longer,” I told her as I slipped the last of the guns into my shoulder holster.



“Until what?”



“Until the last of the fuckers who might have access to the information on your chip are dead.” I pulled out another cigarette and lit it.



“Why do you do that?” she asked.



“Do what?”



“Smoke?”



“I dunno,” I said, narrowing my eyes. “It’s relaxing, I guess.”



“You don’t seem relaxed.”



“I’m not.”



“Then it doesn’t work?”



“No, it does,” I countered. “I’d be less relaxed if I didn’t have it.”



She was quiet for a while as she continued to poke at a baked potato.



“It’s bad for you,” she piped up.



“I’ve heard that.” I gave her a half smile with the cigarette sticking out of the corner of my mouth.



“So you should quit,” she surmised.



“I doubt that.”



“Why not?”



“Why would I?” I was starting to get a little annoyed with the line of questioning. No one had ever asked me about it before – not even when I picked up the habit at the age of thirteen. Of course I knew it was bad for you, but who really gives a shit?



“You could…get cancer.” She was still staring down at her plate, pulling bits of potato out of its skin and pushing it around.



“One less asshole in the world then, right?” I smirked, but dropped the grin when she looked up at me sharply.



“You aren’t an asshole,” she replied.



“Seriously? The guy who bought you isn’t an asshole? That’s rich.”



She went quiet, and again I wondered if grunting was a better option. She tossed her fork down and walked into the bedroom area of the suite. I thought about going after her, because she was obviously upset and I figured it must be because of something I said or did or whatever. I didn’t though, because chances are I would just make it worse. I called Alice instead.



“You done?”



“Almost,” she said. I could hear screaming in the background, which then abruptly stopped.


“Done now.”



“Fabulous,” I mumbled. “Did they get word off to the group here?”



“I don’t think they did, but they knew about Aro here already. I don’t think they knew about Laurent, but most likely the group there is already on alert. You want us to head that direction before you move?”



“No,” I answered definitively. “The longer we wait, the more aware they will be. Best to go now, before they can really organize or enlist help.”



“So, you going to head for the bar?”



“Yeah.” I stubbed my cigarette into the ashtray. “Emmett says they’ll be there in about a half hour. I plan on giving them a little time to settle, but not much. Hit should be quick.”



“What are you going to do with Bella?”



“Take her with me.” I shrugged to myself. Shrugging and grunting – I should make both part of my standard communication –package. “She’ll have a vest and I’ll le her hang at the bar, take care of them, then walk right back out.”



“Did you get my gifts?”



“Yep,” I said as I placed my hand on top of the gun at my hip. “All set and ready.”



“Call when you’re done.”



“Will do.”



I hung up and looked over to the open doorway where Bella had recently disappeared. I took a long breath and headed through it. Bella was sitting on the edge of the bed, looking down at her hands.



“We need to go,” I told her.



“Killing time again, is it?” she snarked at me.



“Something like that,” I said with a nod. “This one will be quick and easy, though.”



“Right.”



I didn’t miss the sarcasm, but did ignore it. Bella stood up and followed me out.



After this it would be smooth sailing, right?



Chapter End Notes:
Yep, buy yourself a boat to take on the Seine, Doofus.



I have never traveled in France, so if I get crap wrong, you will just have to forgive me.



Hope everyone likes CBWR?’s new home! Drop me a review/comment and let me know!


140 comments:

  1. I don't really mind the new home. Of course I wish FF wouldn't have been idiots/dicks and removed it, but whatev. This'll do.

    Loved the chapter. I hope Bella seeks pay-back on them and loves every second of it. :D

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  2. Sorry to hear about all the troubles you have been going through recently. But I am glad that you take the time to post this story elsewhere. This was a great chapter. And I like the new CBWR? blog.

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  3. Doofus is such an idiot, it's almost endearing. Almost.
    And poor Bella is so confused. She obviously cares for him, but her logic tells her, rightly so, that he's the one responsible for her fucked up situation.

    I'm fine with the new home, btw. Stupid FFN.

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  4. CBWR's new home is snazzy, Savage.

    This story was too good for the likes of ff.net, anyway.

    I really liked this chapter and Bella's concern for Doofy's health. Your description of his expressions were awesome.

    ~Amydee

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  5. I check the blog on a regular basis anyway so this is fine. I don't care where it's posted as long as it's posted. I liked Bella telling Edward he's not an asshole. He really isn't one to her (excluding the whole buying her thing) so it's not surprising to hear her say that. I'm a little nervous about the next chapter. All the hits have gone so smoothly so far. Will that last? --Monique

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  6. It's absolutely ridiculously that you got pulled. Love your story! I don't care that it's here, just some place where I can continue to love it! Thanks for taking the time to repost.

    Fuck ff.net!

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  7. thanks for the update, this was a quick recovery.

    i was not expecting you to update so soon.

    i am glad though.

    by the way, i don't know if i am right, but i think the feed burner service is not working properly.

    i entered my info as requested and then i confirmed the subscription.


    but i didn't receive an email alerting me chapter 48 was posted.

    i was reading previous chapter when i notice the new addition, but there was no new emails in my inbox.

    perhaps i am wrong , but i thought i should say something just in case.

    thanks for the update shay.
    :)

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  8. Sorry about your troubles, and FanFiction being assholes!

    Great job of getting the story back up, I missed dufus!

    looking forward to the time he gets a clue that she loves him!

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  9. Thanks you thank you thank you for the update I really think I was going through withdrawls. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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  10. Thanks for the update.
    Excellent chapter!

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  11. im sorry about all the trouble you've been going through. the blog is great though, thanks for doing all this - i absolutely love this story. great chapter. more please!!

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  12. Aw I think she cares for him a bit... He is not an asshole just ignorant!

    Will you let us know about UC? Will u post it here as well?

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  13. I would absolutely read CBWR anywhere you post it! I'm glad you didn't let FFnet fuckery dissuade you from continuing with this story. Great update and can't wait to see how smoothly 'killing time' goes!

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  14. Like the new home and the new chapter. I liked how Bella still worries about him. I really like how she has not given up on him. I know that really confuses poor dufus. He is just so clueless.

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  15. I like how Edward just doesn't get that Bella cares about him, at least a little bit. And he isn't an asshole, just clueless.

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  16. *grunt* great chapter :) *shrug* can't wait until the next update *grunt* ;)

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  17. I found ya :))))))
    thx for quick post... only now off to reading

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  18. I really love it! I can't wait for the next chapter.

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  19. Hope this review goes thru. You just posted to this blog and already have 8000 + reviews? Wow. Hope Idiot trys and talk to Bella to sort out that they both want to stay together, I think. Or at least he vocalizes he wants her to stay. Guess I will have to wait and find out. LOL
    Mwah
    Barbr9

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  20. Love your new home, darlin'! This story just keeps me on the edge of my seat every chapter. I'm probably lookin' waaay too far ahead but I'm hopin' Edward eventually has to meet Charlie?! That little confrontation could be epic!

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  21. Love this story and its new blog. Forget about FFN. I love how Bella is really pissed at Edward for smoking. It shows how she really cares about him. But he's still clueless about it all. Really want to know how they will interact with each other alone in France.

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  22. LOVED IT!!!!! new home fine to me hehehe lol

    ohhh please update soon !!!!

    xxx

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  23. Hi!! so glad you are not abandoning!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING..!!! shrot but great as ever.. what about UC? take care...

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  24. I think it's an old typesetter's saying, because metal type is reversed, so a p would look like a q and vice versa.

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  25. Amazing how fast you pulled together this new site. Thank you. I like this home better anyway. Great chapter, even though he didn't earn a Scooby snack this time. I liked Bella lecturing Edward on smoking. It also showed his lack of self-worth. He has therapy written all over him.

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  26. You know, I know the chapters are short but you got this place up and running really fast :D Thank you.

    And yes, he needs to learn how to nod or something that doesn't involve him speaking because he digs a hole every time he does LOL She was actually telling him this out of concern. I'm telling you he needs more brains because he can't get a clue even when it's handed to him ^_^

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  27. Aw she doesn't think he's an asshole. That's good, right? ;)

    I hope the things go as smooth as Edward thinks they would.

    Thanks for the update. I like the new home :) Is UC going to have one too?

    Olena

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  28. I think this is a great home, nobody looking over your shoulder, you know? I am sorry for all the crap you have had to deal with, but at least your car is running! Yay for that! Now Edward? Bella actually let him know that she cares if he lives or dies and that she does not think he is an asshole. And what does he do? Says something stupid of course. I have a feeling that this last job is not going to be as quick and easy as he thinks, but I do not mind if I am wrong about that. So glad for this chapter, because I was beginning to go through withdrawal! lol!

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  29. Ha! You can't hide from me.

    So far, smooth, Doofus. Too smooth.

    Still not feeling good about this...


    xx

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  30. Things cannot posibly go as smooth as they would like?
    Thanks for updating. :)

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  31. Glad you're here. CBWR? is too good to give up. Thanks for continuing. Awesome job.

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  32. So happy you have "landed" here. Still annoyed with FFN... they are lame and whoever complained about your story are obvious assholes.

    Glad your back with this nutty Edward!!!

    Jane

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  33. glad you were able to post. I was getting a nervous twitch from withdrawal.Was wondering about the complaint against you. I guess some don't understan this is fiction. It's called fiction for a reason. While somewhere in the world I know buying and selling of people goes on, your story was one of fiction... it's made up stuff... geeze.. thanks, now i feel a smidge better Hoping this hit goes as smoothly as the other but somehow I get the feeling something will screw up. Pam B.

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  34. Love the new blog...so glad you found a place for CBWR!!!! Loved the chapter...he just cracks me up the way he can't figure out what to say...ha!

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  35. What the hell! Why did they pull it from FF? It's no more graphic and shit than all the rest of the ones posted are. Jackasses! I was wondering where my updates were!

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  36. Something tells me this hit may not go well....
    He makes 'taking Bella with him' to a hit like me taking my 8 yr old to work with me because I can't find a sitter... Such a doofus!
    Again, inner monologue so awesome!
    Btw. Some men (and women), but mostly men, would do better to realize it would be best to NOT talk at all. That is actually a brilliant thought. Doofus ain't so dumb after all!

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  37. Now that I vented about the idiots messing up our story access...

    Love the chapter and good for her for getting on him for smoking! I wonder what she was blushing about when she woke up - maybe a good dream? mmmmmm

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  38. Great chapter! thank you so much for taking the time to get this story to us, I have no words. I love this Bella, one of the best! Thanks Savage

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  39. Great chapter Chica! I'm liken Bella tons here!

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  40. Great chapter. Good changes ahead for all it seems. Bella is letting her real thoughts come out and E is feeling very protective and caring for her. ;)

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  41. I've subscribed but don't get alerts for new posts. Is that normal? How can I get them if they're available?

    Anywhooo.... chapter was great. I knew Bella wouldn't think horribly of him. That part of your Edward is typical -no one thinks less of him than himself.

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  42. I don't mind CBWR's new home. Although I bet it makes things a bit more difficult for you, and I'm sorry for that. Have a nice night, thank you for posting and keeping up with the story.

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  43. Love the new blog! Can't wait for him to see what Bella really sees him as.

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  44. Wish FF weren't being such dickheads, but this is good!

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  45. Another great chapter. I hope Edward is prepared because I get the feeling that this hit isn't going to be as easy as he thinks it is. I'm glad Bella is going to have a vest on. She'll need it. Maybe she'll get a chance to show him how good she is with a weapon.

    Great chapter. Great story. Update quickly.

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  46. So glad you found a new home for the story while FF removes the whatever from their ass.... So rediculous that they pulled you....

    Thank you for putting this up so quickly :)

    Poor Edward I can understand his comments but geez if I wasn't afraid of him shooting me I would want to smack him :)

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  47. I actually like the new home, its very pretty. Love the story and cant wait for more.

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  48. First and foremost, I love it that you call Edward doofus. I mean is, but it's still funny. Bella's starting to grow a conscience now? I guess it is all starting to weigh on her. Plus I bet she is having some lusty feelings about her hubby. LOL

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  49. Love the story and Edward is still clueless. I love the new home and you don't have to deal with FF issues!

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  50. Love the new site! Sorry about fan fiction.net. I don't think this story warranted it being pulled. Love the chapter and I can't wait for more ;)

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  51. Another great chapter! Love that he's still on uneven footing, but can't wait to see what happens once the killings done and they have to actually co-exist for a bit.

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  52. Love your new site! Great chapter...Doofus is so clueless, tho' at least he's trying!

    Hoping to get email alerts now, although I'll come look.

    Any word on UC? Will you leave it on FF, or move it here?

    xoSus

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  53. Love CBWR?s new home...

    Great chapter! Love the way the story is progessing!

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  54. Thank you for finding a new home and continuing the story.. FanFiction what can say,I really dont know how this story could be a violation.
    There is a lot more disturbing stuff out there.
    Great chapter again and Doofward is really coming around. I do wonder what is going thru Bella's head.

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  55. Ah sigh. Exactly what you needed when you have no time as it is. Thanks for finding us a new home so that we can continue reading and you posting.

    I wouldn't want to be without this. :-)

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  56. So glad to see you back bb! Ffn is a bunch of doofuses! Lol. Glad you have a home, I know it's been a lot of work for you and we really appreciate everything! Take your time on UC, though I'm dying for an update , I can be patient too!

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  57. Holy shit you've already got a lot of views! Awesome! Great chap! Thanks for the update!

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  58. Quick and easy? Yeah, Eddie is delusional. I'm sure it will be easy peezey. *rolls eyes*

    Great chapter Savage. Thanks for the update!

    Stephanie

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  59. I don't care where CBWR is stored. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
    I'm excited to see what's in the cards for Doofusward.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  60. First, I tought that I lost that story.. and then read your note at FF. Sorry for all that trouble but I'm so happy that I can keep on reading it ! This is so good :)

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  61. Doofus might want to look into that 'no talking' thing. ;) As for the next hit being easy, somehow I suspect his optimism may be unwarranted.

    So glad to see this story has a new home, though of course I'm still upset at what FF did.

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  62. I love it that CBWR got a new home so quickly! Thank you for this, Savage!

    Bella seems to be genuinely concerned with Edward’s well being. She told him earlier in the story that no one ever took care of him, and now she’s worried that he smokes…This is encouraging, even if some other girl would probably hate his guts by now for what he’s done to her. But Bella’s special. And she definitely wants to help him.

    He made me laugh when he thought that maybe he should just shrug and grunt all the time…LOL!

    Underneath it all, he’s human, unlike the criminals that got Bella, and that’s what she can see. I hope the next hit won’t be too dangerous….

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  63. I am happy to have Doufus anywhere but this is a great place.
    thanks for keeping up with it and not letting the FF idiots ruin this fic

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  64. The whole chapter came to my email this morning. I like this:)

    I also like the idea of him only grunting and shrugging, it would be so funny. Poor guy, he have no idea what to do with ther.

    Can't wait to find out what will happen at the bar. It doesn't seem as easy as he said.

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  65. Edward is taking a big risk taking Bella with him since they already know what has happened and that they are next.
    I wonder if Edward will ever say and or do the right thing in bellas eyes?

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  66. Sorry about the forced relocation, but this works well, too! Edward is ever the optimist, isn't he?

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  67. The new home for CBWR? works great for me so whoever reported your story can stick their sour grapes right up their arse.

    Poor Bella is having a hard time reconciling her anger at Doofus with her growing affection for him - such a dichotomy for her. Clearly, all the violence being done in her name does not sit comfortably with her either, but I wonder if she might get called upon to save her husband's life at some point? That could put a whole new spin on things.

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  68. HOW IS IT THAT I JUST FOUND OUT ABOUT THIS BLOG
    NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ???

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  69. Just found out the story had to move. It's kind of sad. But since it already has such a wonderful new home... Their lost.

    Oh! Edward, he is completely clueless! I hope he doesn't follow sitcoms examples, that won't help him at all.

    It's amazing how he can't realize Bella worries about the guy who bought her. That has to mean something, right? Apparently not to him, yet. ;)

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  70. Aww Bella doesn't want him to get cancer.. That's progress, no? :) I liked that she told him that he's not such an asshole after all. Yes- he did buy her.. on a dumb, completely clueless impulse; but the dude is trying to make things better the only way he knows how.

    Doofy's new home is lookin' spiffy btw!
    *flips ffn the bird* :)

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  71. Hey sweet! Back in business. Yay! Wonder if that was a no smoking suite, maybe that's why Bella was mad lol. And smoking guns next, yes? cat5050

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  72. Cracked me up.......it is all so nonchalant:

    “You done?”


    “Almost,” she said. I could hear screaming in the background, which then abruptly stopped.

    Well I have been to France and I don't give one flying flip if you get things wrong or not! Won't ruin the story for me!!! *wink*

    Keye

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  73. I obviously missed all the drama and just now realized why I was missing these updates :/ Thank goodness my semester is almost over and I can in the know.

    I'm sure this will be as easy as Edward says...NOT!

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  74. I started Reading UEC because i hadn't heard from this story in a while, then i actually read your account. man FF can be dorkish at times but i'm glad you are still going with the story. hope you get you FF privalages back soon

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  75. Love the new home! Too bad about FFN, but whatever. I'm about to start reading Unexpected Circumstances and wondered where updates to that story might be posted, as it's not marked as complete.

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  76. Thanks for getting this site up and running!
    Somehow, I don't think we close do being "done" yet...

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  77. Yup! Love the pretty new digs! Sucks that ff did that. *sigh* Glad I checked the thread and then remembered the blog for UC! :D

    Loving the tantalizing clues we're getting about Bella's head space. E's actually trying to grope for a clue... but ye-ah. ;D

    Thanks!!!

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  78. I will follow you here, there, anywhere!! Now that I know you are updating (I think I subscribed to the comments and not the blog before)..I will make sure the gals on FB are aware!!

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  79. seems b still plans to take care of e. e shouldn't get too comfortable with this being easy - seems like maybe it won't be
    tff000

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  80. Sorry to hear about all the troubles you have been going through recently. But I am glad that you take the time to post this story elsewhere. This was a great chapter. And I like the new CBWR? blog. Stupid ff
    It would seem that Bella is developing feelings despite better judgement, & doofus, being a doofus, is oblivious. I also am getting the feeling things are about to get complicated.

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  81. So glad CBWR is still alive & running! Damn you FFN! As with every story you write, I loved it!

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  82. So how they get word no one left alive.

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  83. fanfiction fucking sucks!! however this is a cool place to read this story!! as long as i have access i don't care!lol! people just need to mind their own business and not read a story rather than tittletattle!! geez dumbasses!! anyways this chapter saddened me a little cos it seems that edward really is gonna let her go when it's all over! i wonder if bella has come to that realisation too! why is she being so subdued!! i guess it's all pretty daunting for her..all the killing n stuff! excellent!

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  84. as always FFN are a bunch of a-holes they keep up stuff that should be banned and take off stuff that they shouldn't. i have almost given up reading on there. i got this link from a different forest. go check it out.. i have a feeling this isn't going to go as smooth as we think!

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  85. So how they get word no one left alive.

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  86. seems b still plans to take care of e. e shouldn't get too comfortable with this being easy - seems like maybe it won't be
    tff000

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  87. I will follow you here, there, anywhere!! Now that I know you are updating (I think I subscribed to the comments and not the blog before)..I will make sure the gals on FB are aware!!

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  88. Yup! Love the pretty new digs! Sucks that ff did that. *sigh* Glad I checked the thread and then remembered the blog for UC! :D

    Loving the tantalizing clues we're getting about Bella's head space. E's actually trying to grope for a clue... but ye-ah. ;D

    Thanks!!!

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  89. I obviously missed all the drama and just now realized why I was missing these updates :/ Thank goodness my semester is almost over and I can in the know.

    I'm sure this will be as easy as Edward says...NOT!

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  90. Hey sweet! Back in business. Yay! Wonder if that was a no smoking suite, maybe that's why Bella was mad lol. And smoking guns next, yes? cat5050

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  91. HOW IS IT THAT I JUST FOUND OUT ABOUT THIS BLOG
    NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ???

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  92. Edward is taking a big risk taking Bella with him since they already know what has happened and that they are next.
    I wonder if Edward will ever say and or do the right thing in bellas eyes?

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  93. I am happy to have Doufus anywhere but this is a great place.
    thanks for keeping up with it and not letting the FF idiots ruin this fic

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  94. First, I tought that I lost that story.. and then read your note at FF. Sorry for all that trouble but I'm so happy that I can keep on reading it ! This is so good :)

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  95. Quick and easy? Yeah, Eddie is delusional. I'm sure it will be easy peezey. *rolls eyes*

    Great chapter Savage. Thanks for the update!

    Stephanie

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  96. Ah sigh. Exactly what you needed when you have no time as it is. Thanks for finding us a new home so that we can continue reading and you posting.

    I wouldn't want to be without this. :-)

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  97. Thank you for finding a new home and continuing the story.. FanFiction what can say,I really dont know how this story could be a violation.
    There is a lot more disturbing stuff out there.
    Great chapter again and Doofward is really coming around. I do wonder what is going thru Bella's head.

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  98. Love CBWR?s new home...

    Great chapter! Love the way the story is progessing!

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  99. Love your new site! Great chapter...Doofus is so clueless, tho' at least he's trying!

    Hoping to get email alerts now, although I'll come look.

    Any word on UC? Will you leave it on FF, or move it here?

    xoSus

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  100. First and foremost, I love it that you call Edward doofus. I mean is, but it's still funny. Bella's starting to grow a conscience now? I guess it is all starting to weigh on her. Plus I bet she is having some lusty feelings about her hubby. LOL

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  101. Another great chapter. I hope Edward is prepared because I get the feeling that this hit isn't going to be as easy as he thinks it is. I'm glad Bella is going to have a vest on. She'll need it. Maybe she'll get a chance to show him how good she is with a weapon.

    Great chapter. Great story. Update quickly.

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  102. Wish FF weren't being such dickheads, but this is good!

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  103. I've subscribed but don't get alerts for new posts. Is that normal? How can I get them if they're available?

    Anywhooo.... chapter was great. I knew Bella wouldn't think horribly of him. That part of your Edward is typical -no one thinks less of him than himself.

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  104. Great chapter Chica! I'm liken Bella tons here!

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  105. Now that I vented about the idiots messing up our story access...

    Love the chapter and good for her for getting on him for smoking! I wonder what she was blushing about when she woke up - maybe a good dream? mmmmmm

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  106. Love the new blog...so glad you found a place for CBWR!!!! Loved the chapter...he just cracks me up the way he can't figure out what to say...ha!

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  107. glad you were able to post. I was getting a nervous twitch from withdrawal.Was wondering about the complaint against you. I guess some don't understan this is fiction. It's called fiction for a reason. While somewhere in the world I know buying and selling of people goes on, your story was one of fiction... it's made up stuff... geeze.. thanks, now i feel a smidge better Hoping this hit goes as smoothly as the other but somehow I get the feeling something will screw up. Pam B.

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  108. So happy you have "landed" here. Still annoyed with FFN... they are lame and whoever complained about your story are obvious assholes.

    Glad your back with this nutty Edward!!!

    Jane

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  109. You know, I know the chapters are short but you got this place up and running really fast :D Thank you.

    And yes, he needs to learn how to nod or something that doesn't involve him speaking because he digs a hole every time he does LOL She was actually telling him this out of concern. I'm telling you he needs more brains because he can't get a clue even when it's handed to him ^_^

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  110. I think it's an old typesetter's saying, because metal type is reversed, so a p would look like a q and vice versa.

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  111. Hi!! so glad you are not abandoning!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING..!!! shrot but great as ever.. what about UC? take care...

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  112. LOVED IT!!!!! new home fine to me hehehe lol

    ohhh please update soon !!!!

    xxx

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  113. Love this story and its new blog. Forget about FFN. I love how Bella is really pissed at Edward for smoking. It shows how she really cares about him. But he's still clueless about it all. Really want to know how they will interact with each other alone in France.

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  114. Love your new home, darlin'! This story just keeps me on the edge of my seat every chapter. I'm probably lookin' waaay too far ahead but I'm hopin' Edward eventually has to meet Charlie?! That little confrontation could be epic!

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  115. Hope this review goes thru. You just posted to this blog and already have 8000 + reviews? Wow. Hope Idiot trys and talk to Bella to sort out that they both want to stay together, I think. Or at least he vocalizes he wants her to stay. Guess I will have to wait and find out. LOL
    Mwah
    Barbr9

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  116. *grunt* great chapter :) *shrug* can't wait until the next update *grunt* ;)

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  117. Like the new home and the new chapter. I liked how Bella still worries about him. I really like how she has not given up on him. I know that really confuses poor dufus. He is just so clueless.

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  118. I would absolutely read CBWR anywhere you post it! I'm glad you didn't let FFnet fuckery dissuade you from continuing with this story. Great update and can't wait to see how smoothly 'killing time' goes!

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  119. Aw I think she cares for him a bit... He is not an asshole just ignorant!

    Will you let us know about UC? Will u post it here as well?

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  120. im sorry about all the trouble you've been going through. the blog is great though, thanks for doing all this - i absolutely love this story. great chapter. more please!!

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  121. Thanks you thank you thank you for the update I really think I was going through withdrawls. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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  122. Sorry about your troubles, and FanFiction being assholes!

    Great job of getting the story back up, I missed dufus!

    looking forward to the time he gets a clue that she loves him!

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  123. Sorry to hear about all the troubles you have been going through recently. But I am glad that you take the time to post this story elsewhere. This was a great chapter. And I like the new CBWR? blog.

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  124.  awwwwwwwww......................bells finally comin 2 terms wid sum kinda feelin for #DoucheWard. I mean she cares 4 him hmphhhhhhhhhhh, well we all kno he's fallin ahrd 4 her but typical DOUCHE dat he is, he wont fully admit it yet. Not evn a little.................#FcukinSueHim!!!!! hahahahaaaaaaa..............lets get this killin show on da road wil ya!!!!!!

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  125.  LOL, killing time indeed. Wonder how quick this will really be?

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  126. Poor Bella, shes been through hell! 

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  127. Wonder why I waited so long to read this. Now I'm playing catch-up 

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  128. I love their back and forth banter! 

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  129. I like it! But then, this is the only place I've read it! haha I do remember when FF took it off though.. I wrote them a "respectful" email asking them to reconsider. They couldn't even be bothered to email me back to say fuck off! :(

    I'm worried about how bad it will be with just him.. :(

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  130. I love that Bella is getting her snark on!! I'm so glad that you found a way to re-post x

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  131. I have a theory on the Ps and Qs comment. In economic graphs of supply and demand, one axis is the Price per unit, usually shortened to P; the other axis is the Quantity demanded (at Price per unit), shortened to Q. So when you "Mind your Ps and Qs", you are quite literally, minding your own business.

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  132. Biology major here.   Can't figure out how a chip in the back of her head made its way to thevision center of her brain.  artistic license again? This story is great...can see it as an action adventure movie.

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  133. Interesting...wonder what Bella is thinking??

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  134. Smoothing sailing??? Knowing savage I highly doubt it! Lol

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  135. So Bella see's enough good in him to be worried about his health? Doesn't sound like she's enjoying the killing part, though.
    Please excuse my appalling spelling. I have a sticky 'e' and need a beta for my messages too

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  136. I didn't even know about this fic until i started your new one. But i love it. I read a lot of slave fic on ffn and they don't get removed. I just think you got hated on because you get so much luv. But fuck em , i'd follow you anywhere. K.monique801

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