Wednesday, May 11, 2011

CBWR? Chapter 79

Author’s notes:
Answers to various questions/comments – 1) Bella got the depo shot from Aro, and it hasn’t been 3 months, so she’s still covered.  2) Call it cock-block if you will, but this “scene” is going to last multiple chapters.  If you don’t want it to last that long, say the word – I’ll fade to black and write the day after chapter.  Ha!  Yeah…didn’t think so. *evil grin*
Ok, failed that one.
Chapter 79
Bella’s fingers ran around the edge of my boxers from the back to the sides before she started pushing them down, freeing my aching cock in the process.  I kicked out of them, toeing off my socks as well, but not breaking the kiss.  That is, until I felt Bella’s hand wrap around me.
“Shit…Bella…”  I tried to get a grip on my breathing while she had a grip on my cock, but it just wasn’t working.  I pulled her hand away, and she narrowed her eyes at me.  “Not yet, okay?”
“Why?”
“Because it feels so fucking good I’m going to come all over your hand if you do that now.”
She bit down on her lip to try and hide her smile, then trailed the tips of her fingers over my length before letting go and placing her hands on my shoulders instead.  I hissed at the feeling and leaned my forehead against her shoulder.
“I want to make this right,” I whispered.
“You will,” she said encouragingly.
“I’ll try.”  It was all I could do.  I looked back to her eyes, kissed her once more, and tried to come up with some kind of brilliant strategy.
Brilliant strategy step one – come up with brilliant strategy prior to being naked.
Ok, failed that one.
Next step – she had to be ready.
Better luck this time…I hoped.
My hands went to her breasts, my thumbs brushing over her nipples.  They hardened under my touch, and Bella leaned her head back against the wall, closing her eyes in the process.  I moved my hands down, over her stomach and to her sides as I slowly knelt down before her.  I hooked my thumbs into the edges of her panties and then looked up to her eyes.
She was smiling, and reached down to run her hand through my hair as she nodded.  Taking a single, deep breath, I pulled them down her legs, watching my progress as they dropped lower.  I didn’t look up to the area I had exposed…I wasn’t ready for that yet.
When I reached the floor, Bella stepped out of her heels and let me pull the panties over her feet and off of her all together.  I ran the edge of my fingers across her feet and to her ankles as I tried to mentally prepare myself to look up again.  I wanted to see her – no fucking doubt of that at all – but I was kind of afraid of it, too, though I couldn’t tell you why.
If I had known…
I slowly looked up, figuring I couldn’t spend all night down where I was, and my eyes tried to bug out of my head.
“Holy fucking shit,” I whispered.
Bella had apparently done more at the spa than I had realized.
She was totally fucking bare, and I wasn’t prepared for that at all.
“Is it okay?” Bella asked quietly.  “I didn’t really know what you preferred…”
I couldn’t speak outside of expletives, so I went with a muted nod instead.  I ran my hands up the sides of her legs, resisting the urge to just haul her over to the bed and start pounding into her beautiful, naked pussy.
As if my cock was throbbing before, the visual floating around in my head was going straight to my other head.
I tried to get both my breathing and heart rate to calm down a bit, and then ran my hands up the back of her calves.  I leaned forward, placing light kisses up one thigh, then the other.  I didn’t reach out for her pussy – not yet – but I did bring my hands up to her backside to pull her towards me as my lips brushed over her hips and stomach.
“Bella?”  I looked up to her face.
“Yes?”  Apparently her breathing as a little off, too.
“Can I take you to bed now?”
She nodded, and I stood up.  My hands found hers – lacing our fingers together before I turned and led her over to the bed and the rose petals, which were suddenly looking really stupid and childish to me.  I wished I hadn’t done it at all, but then Bella gasped.
“Oh my God,” she whispered.  She let go of one of my hands and placed hers over her mouth.  “Did you do that?”
“Um…yeah?”
She looked from the bed, covered in a rose-petal heart, to me.
“It’s beautiful.”
I guess I got something right, right?
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Chapter end notes:
So far so good, right?
More soccer games tonight.  There might be a late update, though.
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78 comments:

  1. go edward go edward i loved it so nice to have some for-play first :)

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  2. I love how hard he's trying to do this right. Le sigh...

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  3. Yay! Yes you did perfectly right! Oh please don't fade to black. Make it last 6 chapters if you want, just don't skip.

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  4. Fuck those bitches that are giving you shit about you being a cock blocker. I love how you are doing the sexytimes!

    Thanks for the chapter.

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  5. this has to be a new version of slow burn.

    :) thanks for the update.

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  6. Very nice..... Edward was speechless! LOL! Nice and slow, keeps us wanting more! Make it as long as you want!

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  7. He did good. Go ahead and make it last as long as you like. Looking forward to the next update.

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  8. You're killing me.

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  9. Loved it. Just please please don't let the calvary barge in and ruin it. you have set up the perfect night, the perfect way for her to loose it, and just please let it happen - no fuck ups. I don't really care if it takes you two weeks (well, i do care . . . just sayin . . .)


    Vickisan

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  10. omg this......is.....awesome....talk about delayed gratification! you are evil *smirk*

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  11. I agree with @b559e7ebde45bf9713180edc0597b487 let them have their night even if it does last over few chapters :D

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  12. OMG it's about time. There almost there please please please don't have alice call or the idiot that was following them show up. These two need this. Not to mention the rest of us need to read it lol

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  13. Aww, he’s trying so hard to make this good for Bella. I don’t know how you manage to make me dislike Edward at the beginning of your stories and then fall absolutely head over heels in love with him by the end. You are awesome! However, don’t you dare fade to black! Take as many chapters as you need! Thanks you, that’ll be all.

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  14. I knew she'd love the petals! Sigh.... Crossed fingers for Doofy to not fuck up and them to not be interrupted.

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  15. Yeah, he got something right alright. Sweet Edward, I love him. He can do me anytime. LOL. Whatever you do, please don't fade to black or have them get interrupted before the do it. That would kill me.

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  16. So good. I don't mind drawn out ;)

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  17. Awww... u see?... loving Doofus more every chapter... - @MoniNP

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  18. It's so goood! He totally is getting it right. Great chapter, thanks Savage.

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  19. I love that Bella went all gooey over the petals....it'll make Doofy feel good...make him feel like he's doing something right at last. Oh....and you can make this scene last as long as you bloody like...ok? hehe

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  20. Please let this night be perfect for them...and looking forward to the next chapter

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  21. Gahd this is sweet sweet torture. I want more... gimme more.


    This was perfect.. so far.


    Thank you. ;)

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  22. Lol silly SM fading to black... that wasn't cool at all. She'll get slack for that for eternity. She could have written a PG version .. I mean she eluded to things they did... was her face that red she couldn't handle it?? LOL
    I really gotta look into this Depo shot. Seems like the answer to everything.

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  23. Your notes are great fun to read! We can't tell the authors what to write or not write and how often to post,we can only comment on what we read. Sex or no sex, Carlisle and Esme turning up in the hotel or Aro coming back as a vamp in the next chapter - it is your story and you don't have to please anybody.

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  24. OHMYGAWD!!! Way, way hawt (and sorta sweet, too!)
    Loved your A/N..you are so funny!

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  25. @Buffbronze....I'm with you, bb!

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  26. He got a lot of things right. ;-)


    He's so nervous about doing something wrong—it's adorable. He just needs to relax, take it slow (until she says otherwise) and make her feel loved.

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  27. Ungh!!! The things you do to me with him, Woman!!! ::looks like a full grown version of Drew Barrymore in "Firestarter":: Whoooshe!!

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  28. Loved this update and can't wait for the updates...But Please DO NOT fade away. I can handle a little bit of torture!

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  29. Oooh Savage....and that is totally what you are! This is so awesome....we're gonna get some we're gonna get some (in sing song voice)!! Chapter after chapter Thanks!!

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  30. So far, so good. I am really nervous for him though. Our baby is all grown up!

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  31. Hahahahahahaaa! I'm still cracking up over your beginning note. Noooooo! Don't you dare fade to black, Shay! LOL! Don't even think it! In fact, I take back what I said about cockblocking! Hahaha. Take ten more chapters if you want. This shit is hot! P.s. I love ya! :D

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  32. u know u CAN make the chapter have all the details without fading to black

    by making a LOOOONNNGGGG DETAILED chapter .. without any cockblocking *smiles innocently*

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  33. Poor thing. Her first wax and first - first!
    Ouch. All over ouch!
    Let's hope he moves the rose petals.

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  34. YOU'RE KILLING ME EVER SO SOFTLY!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  35. First of all.... NO thank you on the fade to black. I'll take long... drawn out... Doofy cockblocking over fade to black any day.

    This chapter was cute. I like that Edward isn't sure of what to do because he's doing this with Bella. It's different for him... and it should be this time.

    I can't wait to see what idiocy Doofy gets into trying to get ALL toise petals OFF the bed now! LOL

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  36. *Bouncy Claps* He got something right! good job doofusward...and i am sooo good with multi chap lemon :)

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  37. I have never had the privilege of a rose petal heart on my bed. Question? Do they
    find their way into all your crevasses like sand does?

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  38. Beautiful chapter.

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  39. It's almost like hes the virgin here and you've captured that so well!

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  40. No fading to black!!! As stressful as the cliffhangers, blockages and soccer games might be, no fading to black, please.
    The slow recount is making me hot and bothered. And the tension is painfully thrilling and enjoyable. But please don't over do it any more :)

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  41. you are doing great ed!! you can do it you can do it!!!

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  42. it hurts me that he has to try so hurt. it hurts me that simple acts such as holding hands is weird to him. it hurts me so much........ poor edward. I feel sorry for him.


    And you, you should better update as soon as you can!!! Maybe you should give as one (or more) long and nice chapter(s) on friday because its rob's 25th bday!!!

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  43. the line you had about the visual going to his 'other' head, made me remember an old text i once recieved. I think it fits Edward well... '' God messed up when he made guys. He gave them two heads and only enough blood to operate one at a time.'' Also the multi chapter lemon will be lovely.. thank you..

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  44. I'm so happy for Eddie, he did get something right. He's trying so hard and I think he's doing a pretty good job. Excellect!

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  45. Awwww! That was perfect! I knew Bella would love the heart!! Edward is doing great...and take your damn time bb. This can drag out forever! The manip was fuckhawt! Unf! Mwah!

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  46. OH wowziers this is getting good. I can't wait to see if he last with being gentel or just he cums on himself. LMAOOO

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  47. i agree. make the scene as long as you need to but just know i may explode in the meantime. :) this one was pretty divine. i'm not sure how you manage to do this and still shuffle to spring sports. i can barely manage to get them to bed with major issues after our busy afternoons. love ya!

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  48. I see you took his socks off. lol.

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  49. Make it slow burn... I like it so much :)

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  50. I can't wait for Doofy to lose his virginity ;)

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  51. He is doing so good!

    I loved the chapter and please for the love of god do not fade into black!

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  52. I am known to be ever impatient, but I know you will make it all worth the wait. Hey, he got a plus one point here. Not doing too shabby.
    ~Jessi

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  53. This is so perfect. I am totally okay with this scene lasting as long as you like, I love the slow burn.

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  54. I can reply again. Yay. Take it as slow as you want. That is what is so great and different about this fic. Short chapters. As long as you go through with your threat to write a whole chapter about Edward coming. PLEASE!!!

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  55. After all that Bella has had to deal with, they should get an uninterrupted "first time". (Did we actually ever get verification that Bella was indeed a virgin? We know nothing about her life back in Forks and previous boyfriends.) I mean come on Karma, give her a break.
    Technically, it is probably best to have a full body wax while on the run b/c then you have less maintenance and who wants to worry about shaving when your train hopping around Europe.
    I don't think Doof could mess this up for the simple fact that he is trying so hard. Bella knows this is "virgin territory" for him too. Can't wait for more...

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  56. Good gravy, I just read the chapter again and I think I may need my SHAM-WOW PANTIES for the next few! UNF!!! *giggles*

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  57. We gotta take it nice and slow. Edward wants to make it good for Bella and in turn it will be good for us. ;)

    Thanks for sharing.

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  58. Omg I love it! He is so funny

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  59. Brilliant strategy step one – come up with brilliant strategy prior to being naked.
    Ok, failed that one. LOVE. IT.

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  60. omg. he is endearing. he deserves unconditional love - since he didn't get that form his mother. i hope oh i hope he gets it.

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  61. omg. he is endearing. he deserves unconditional love - since he didn't get that form his mother. i hope oh i hope he gets it.

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  62. Brilliant strategy step one – come up with brilliant strategy prior to being naked.
    Ok, failed that one. LOVE. IT.

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  63. We gotta take it nice and slow. Edward wants to make it good for Bella and in turn it will be good for us. ;)

    Thanks for sharing.

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  64. I can reply again. Yay. Take it as slow as you want. That is what is so great and different about this fic. Short chapters. As long as you go through with your threat to write a whole chapter about Edward coming. PLEASE!!!

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  65. I am known to be ever impatient, but I know you will make it all worth the wait. Hey, he got a plus one point here. Not doing too shabby.
    ~Jessi

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  66. He is doing so good!

    I loved the chapter and please for the love of god do not fade into black!

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  67. i agree. make the scene as long as you need to but just know i may explode in the meantime. :) this one was pretty divine. i'm not sure how you manage to do this and still shuffle to spring sports. i can barely manage to get them to bed with major issues after our busy afternoons. love ya!

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  68. it hurts me that he has to try so hurt. it hurts me that simple acts such as holding hands is weird to him. it hurts me so much........ poor edward. I feel sorry for him.


    And you, you should better update as soon as you can!!! Maybe you should give as one (or more) long and nice chapter(s) on friday because its rob's 25th bday!!!

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  69. Beautiful chapter.

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  70. First of all.... NO thank you on the fade to black. I'll take long... drawn out... Doofy cockblocking over fade to black any day.

    This chapter was cute. I like that Edward isn't sure of what to do because he's doing this with Bella. It's different for him... and it should be this time.

    I can't wait to see what idiocy Doofy gets into trying to get ALL toise petals OFF the bed now! LOL

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  71. So far, so good. I am really nervous for him though. Our baby is all grown up!

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  72. He got a lot of things right. ;-)


    He's so nervous about doing something wrong—it's adorable. He just needs to relax, take it slow (until she says otherwise) and make her feel loved.

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  73. Very nice..... Edward was speechless! LOL! Nice and slow, keeps us wanting more! Make it as long as you want!

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  74. Awe, Bella doesnt find it cheesy. How sweet!

    Waxed my own baking area this week. Damn that hurt!

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